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Well with my return its time to write a story. Of course the first after a hiatus is always the most difficult.
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Equestrian Heroes


Naruto x ?


Author's Note

I’ve been thinking about and considering how I wanted to do this story for six months now. I’ve almost got everything figured out to a tee, so I hope you guys enjoy this remake of the story. I decided to make everyone Anthro in this revision because it would make writing certain scenes easier. I hope not to lose anyone as I will be putting a greater focus on developing the ties between characters.

This fic is also going to include Loads and Loads of characters. I want to do my best to give backstory and dimensions to every pony so it could be jumping point to other pairings I wish to do.

I also wanted to put a stronger emphasis on how long and well the characters know each other. I hope you guys enjoy this remake as more content and thought was put into it.


Story Start  


The Bipedal equine continued his walk down the long hallway of the eloquent castle as the soft echoed of his hooved feet echoed along the marbled floor of the castle. He came to a stop in front of two ashen grey furred figures standing guard in front of the lavish double doors. They were both dressed in golden armor that dimly gleamed in the sunlight while being full body so the vital organs weren’t exposed.  

They stood aside allowing the blond entrance to the private study of the Princess. Few people were allowed access to this room.   "Princess Celestia?"  

He had only encountered the princess a few times, their first meeting being the only one with prolonged discussion. He had remembered that day quite well, it was a warm and sunny evening. The windows were cracked so the roof was far from stuffy unlike many of the archive rooms within the castle. He had been trying to gather information on this world in hopes of getting a reference to the special distortion that he had to fallen through.

To his surprise when the Princess had entered the archive she had been observing him for some time.  It wouldn’t be until later that he would learn that she was assessing if he was a threat or not or what his motives were. He had struck up a conversation with her with such causality that it had caught her off guard. After all between her immense magical powers along with the fact she was the one responsible for raising the Sun and Moon she was heralded as a Goddess.

In comparison to all others she was by far rather statuesque in comparison to all other ponies. She was a good few inches above eight feet tall towering over most of her subjects. Her fur was white, pure, the coat having a sort of a faint luminescence glow to it with her mane a soft and shimmery polychromatic pattern of colors including a light turquoise, violet crystal, and with shades of cerulean and cobalt. Her form was voluptuous with ample chest, long legs and all around appealing figure.    She was wearing a white laced dress that loomed down to her ankles with the rest of her outfit consisting of a golden crown with an assortment of royal gems encrusted in it along with golden horse shoe adornments that she wore on her hooves.  

The room was rather modest, large enough to be filled with a few dressers filled with parchments and books. There were several windows with violet and gold trimmed window curtains as sun rays shined into the room. The desk was also of a fine imported wood with the look of a black leather sort of texture. There behind the desk sat Celestia who seemed to be going over a scroll.

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“Naruto!” Princess Celestia said. "Please, come in! It is good to see you again!"

"Hello, Princess," Naruto said. "It's good to see you, too."

Celestia walked towards Naruto. "I asked the guards to clear the Glass Hallway, so we could speak there in private," she said. "I hope you don't mind?"

“Not at all I just feel glad I’ll finally be able to pay you back.” He said as he glanced to the side and took in his appearance in the mirror. It was something he spent a great deal having to adjust to when he woke up as a bipedal equine.  

It took him a great deal of time to get used to this body. He spent far more effort on tuning up his physical body this time around. His arms and legs more defined with muscles as well as his abs thanks to all the physical work he had partaken in. The outfit he was currently wearing though had hid most of that.  He was only able to do so thanks to Celestia providing him some bits so he could start up a livelihood of sorts in the town he was living in.

He was wearing black uniform pants and dark blue shirt that was made of a slightly inferior material than that of the fine material used by the military.  The material came from up north and quite costly, but it was worth it due to the strength of the material and its weather resistance, but seeing as Naruto wasn’t a guy who had experience or knowledge in fashion he couldn’t make out the details of the economics or the quality of it. “Not to mention I’ve always been curious about the story behind those images.”

“Very well…follow me.” Celestia smiled. She led Naruto out of the room and together, they went to the Glass Hallway.

Naruto had only been through the Glass Hallway once and that was when he snuck in. It was an evening in March in which his attempts to meet the Princess was rebuffed by guards and novel a like at the topic of some no name riffraff would have the gall to try and speak with the Princess. He assumed his mannerisms and lack of high society knowledge made It easy to spot out that he didn’t belong.

As she led him down the hallway he saw many images.  A few of them were rather interesting and he couldn’t wait to hear the story behind them. One was of a red skinned Centaur being banished into a pit of sorts. Another was of Celestia and a pink Alicorn. That was an interesting term as it was a pony with both wings and horn which Celestia was both blessed with. In comparison to Pegasus’s the Princesses wing span was large and majestic like a swan not to mention her horn had enough length to it to be comparable to a saber.

He was jarred from his thoughts when she began speaking. “I suppose you’re wondering why I sent you a letter requesting your presence.” Princess Celestia said. "I have need for your knowledge.”

“I’m not sure if I’m the best pony to come to for knowledge.” Naruto said. When he had been caught by the Princess in her study he decided to be honest and hope to appeal to her sense of mercy. Prior to his arrival he had heard much about the Princess’s character and hoped what he had learned about her was true. Revealing that he was not a pony but a human who traveled through dimensions and taking the form of a pony, it was still hard to wrap his head around the ponies of this world and of his old world was considered the same species.    

“Your knowledge in this particular matter is quite unique. Considering your own past I could trust no one else with such an important task.  I need your help in preparation for Nightmare Moon’s return.” The sound of hoof steps came to a stopped as the Princess paused.  Those pale magnets eyes settled on the blond whose eye lids settled slightly and he cradled his elbows.

He was contemplating her windows, his soft exhale and slow and subtle body movements betrayed his uneasiness.  He had come across reference of her during his research into important and powerful historical artifacts. There were very few mentions or suggestions of something called the Elements of Harmony which he only learned of thanks to Kage Bunshin. It was the knowledge feedback that the jutsu gifted him being the major factor of why he had even discovered the information considering he wasn’t the most astute student.   “So she’s more than just a myth huh?”

“Indeed,” she answered with a nod. “Four months from now a thousand years will have passed since I’ve seen her…”

“…on the day of the Summer Sun Festival.”  He finished as he realized on what day the deity’s release fell on.  “What can I do?” he would be of no assistance to her. No matter how much stride he had made in this body he was far from his past level of strength. Maybe if he had his strength from the Fourth War he could assist Celestia, but he was only at the level of strength he achieved before he had fought Nagato.  Adjusting to this current body was more difficult then he had hoped when he started to train himself back up again.

“I am no longer capable of taking on Nightmare Moon. The Elements of Harmony are the only force capable of stopping her and I’m no longer capable of wielding them.” The words she spoke seemed rather measure, but Naruto chalked it up to it being personal history.  

  “So the issue is finding someone who can?” he theorized.

“There are six elements representing Harmony itself Honesty, Kindness, Loyalty, Generosity, Laughter, and Magic.  For the past few years I have taken the pony who I believe is the Element of Magic, Twilight Sparkle as my student.”

Naruto definitely recognized the name as Celestia had mentioned her in the passing. She had expressed her concerns with the mare’s rather antisocial behavior. He had as of yet met Celestia’s student as the two would just miss each other. “What about the others?”

“Unfortunately that has been a matter that remains unsolved.  For the past  two decades I have been searching from town to town of any possible Element candidates, but that has proven unsuccessful not to mention what knowledge I have on the elements ensured that Magic is the spark that ties them together. My attempts to encourage Twilight to make friends have been less than fruitful and time is running out. There is one last town that has been unchecked and I believe its possible the candidates are there and if they are it is my hope that Twilight will form a bond with them. Seeing as you are a citizen of Ponyville I theorized that it may be possible you have your own thoughts on possible candidates. There is also the fact that I wish to have a second opinion and that I am merely not imposing my wishes and hope upon the ponies not to mention your more familiar relationship with them so you would give you a better insight of their genuine qualities.”

“I see,” he simply stated as he went over Celestia’s confession. It made sense, after all if Celestia had spent all this time looking for the other bearers with only Ponyville left for this year’s search. Not to mention he would know these ponies on a more personal level meaning he would know if the mare was simple and truly honest and not just someone who was honest most of the time. “Very well Princess I’m more than happy to help you, but say even if I do have some ponies in mind, what happens next?”

“I already have plans to send my protégé to help organize the preparations for Ponyville.”

He nodded as he went over the traits again. Honesty. Laughter. Generosity. Loyalty. Kindness. Five ponies capable of wielding legendary artifacts and he would only have a few months to figure them out.  “I see, and when do I start?”

“Immediately.” Celestia said. "This is of the utmost importance."

“Princess I assure you that I’ll do everything I can to help you. Ponyville, no Equestria has become my home now. I will protect it no matter what.”

"Excellent," Celestia said. "I knew I could depend on you. Let's make preparations immediately." She said as the beckoned the blond to follow her.

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Equestrian Heroes


Naruto x ?


Story Start


Mayor Mare was by far among the most normal and stable of ponies. She was wearing a suit with a tie a shade darker than the color of her light grayish amber coat. The mare looked about in her early thirties with a nice fit figure with her light grey mane. Though what few people fail to realize was that their mayor was not as old as her coloration on her mane and tail would suggest, but the fact she hardly looked a day over thirty had them assume she merely looked young for her age.

"The choir will be seated over there," the elder mare said. "Princess Celestia will be behind the onstage curtain until I introduce her."

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"What about food?" Naruto asked. Since Celestia had sent him as a liaison of sorts he would be able to make subtle suggestions of the Mayor on which ponies would be the best for certain positions for the celebration.

"Nopony has volunteered to help with the food yet," Mayor Mare informed him as she went over the checklist of names on the clipboard she was carrying. “There is still a lot to work out with the scheduling of the weather along with the seating and clean-up the organization will have to handle."

“Well Mayor I’ll let you know if I happen to find anyone who can volunteer.” He stated as he mentally began making a list of ponies who might fit the criteria. He was going to have to go down the list one by one.

Cheerilee was without a doubt one of the sweetest ponies that Naruto knew. She was also rather cute and had a kind heart. Her fur coloration was one of the more unique shades in the town of Ponyville with a cerise coat and a very pale rose with her mane a very pale cerise mane. Her outfit consisted of a very modest green and orange pattern ankle length skirt simple short-sleeved white buttoned shirt with knee-length socks and flats. Her outfit highlighted a nice figure with nice hips, but she was someone of a more reserved nature so her look was rather classy.

She was one of the ponies that he felt qualified as an element. Naruto knew Cheerilee enough that she liked spending her Saturdays in the park reading and taking in the fresh air. Because of the tight-knit nature of the town it was easy to develop a tight-knit circle of friends. “So how have you’ve been doing Cheerilee?”

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“Things have been pleasant as always. How was your trip?” Cheerilee asked.

“Interesting,” he began as some ponies traveled by and waved. “I always enjoy traveling when I can.”

The small talk was of simple things really. Like how their day went and speculation of how the Summer Sun Festival was going to entail. It grew late into the afternoon before Naruto bid her goodbye with promises of getting together for Lunch sometime.

Naruto concluded the day with a light meal of celery soup, something that took him a long time to adapt to as he compiled the notes he made.


A very kind and light-hearted mare that enjoyed teaching children.

Friendly and sociable.

She was a good candidate for the elements of Generosity and Kindness, but her talents lie within teaching. The only volunteer work she could conceivably do for the festival was cleanup.

Naruto decided to move to the next pony on his list Ditzy Doo. Naruto made his way to where Ditzy lived in one of the small houses that bordered near the shopping section of the town.

Ponyville wasn’t a large town with a population capping at nearly 400 ponies. With Dinky in school and Amethyst at the academy there was one place where he would find his wide-eyed buddy.

So he went along one of the dirt trails towards one of Ponyville’s farm. The most important crops that made up a lot of the town’s Agriculture consisted of Apples and Carrots. The carrot farm owned by none other than a mare by the name of Golden Harvest or known by her closest friends as Carrot Top thanks to the color of her mane and that farming carrots was her special talent.

The trail to the Carrot farm was a nice mile and a half hike along one of the trails. He made his way across an intersecting path as Harvest’s property came into sight. He eventually made his way to the porch which was a little worn down with patches of hole in the ground. Behind the tinted windows one could make out a curtain shielding the inside of the home from prying eyes with a bug zapper hanging not too far by one of the wooden planks.

Naruto gave a knock on the door and called out to carrot top. “Coming!” a light, almost feathery voice had called out. Opening the door stood the form of Golden Harvest, a carrot orange mane mare with a slender figure bright emerald-green eyes and pale yellow skin. She was wearing a red top underneath overalls showing off tone legs cultivated from being a farmer. Like most farmers there were light callouses on her hands from all the farm work. Though seeing as Harvest was the only one who owned and managed the farm it was small compared to others that worked in said business. “Hey there Naruto. How can I help you?”

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“Hey there Carrot have you happen to see Ditzy? She wasn’t home so I thought I checked here.”

“No, she’s out at the market to restock my fridge since she cleaned it out again.” She remarked with a look mixed between a deadpan and a grimace.

A light chuckle escaped his lips. Golden invited Naruto into her home as his heavy footsteps creaked against the wooden floor board. They entered the kitchen in wear Golden was brewing some hot water for coffee. As Naruto looked around he noticed Carrot had some new wall paper installed as he continued observing the room. The table was new no longer would anyone using it and deal with the squeaks thanks to the bad leg.

“So why are you looking for Ditzy? Something up?” she wondered as she finished pouring the coffee and went to the counter and began cutting out a slice of cake. “Want some cake?”

“No thanks,” he kindly refused as he began adding cream and sugar. “Anyway the reason I’ve been looking for Ditz is for preparation for the festival coming up, speaking of which Carrot this would be a nice opportunity to get some advertisement for your farm if you volunteer. There’s still a spot for a food vender to set up shop.”

“Aww, I would really like to do so, but I’m going out-of-town. I’m visiting my Grandma for her birthday, but you could always try the apples.” She suggested before she turned her body sideways in the chair to still a glance behind Naruto to check the time on the grandfather clock in the hall. “Now where is that mare?”

“So how did you and Ditzy meet?”

Besides Carrot Top he was the only other person that could be called Ditzy’s friend. One would probably argue Pinkie Pie with her help on making a friend of everyone, but the eternally happy and bouncy mare would be better classified as a casual acquaintance.

“Well it’s a bit of a long story. One day I was mining my business when Ditzy all of a sudden crashed through the roof of my living. Scared the living Tartarus out of me.” A pleasant smile graced her lips. “You know how she is, with that smile of hers, greeting me hello without much consideration on just what happened to her. She was about to leave when I noticed she had badly sprained her wing. I had to stop her and practically forced her on my couch.” Golden continued her tale as she had insisted on delivering Ditzy’s package knowing a road to Huffington through an abandoned path in the Everfree forest. “That was when I met this giant rabbit creature. I was so scared at first, but it turned out he was kind friendly. I had managed to come across his garden after being frightened by the giant serpent.” She had gone on to explain how she had enlisted the creature’s help to finish delivering package. “By the time I finally got back Derpy was lounging on my couch with all my foot on the table and you know what she told me? I emptied out your fridge and the worst part is she somehow always manage to get past the locks I put on it.” She finished with a cute pout.

After their conversation Naruto filed Golden’s name away as the possible element of Generosity. “Carrot!” a low almost coltish voice called out before the sound of crashing echoed. “I’m ok!” Naruto and Carrot went up and helped the mare up. “Hi Naruto!” she happily greeted.

“Hey there Ditzy.” He greeted the mare. Ditzy by far would be considered one of the most attractive mares If you changed a few things about her, but those quirks made her who she was and he wouldn’t change a thing about her. Derpy’s voice suited the mare that was a few inches taller than five feet tall. She had a bluish gray coat along with pale light grayish yellow mane and tail along with a pair of Pegasi wings. While Earth ponies were known for their strong bodies and connection with nature, usually resulting in them being the physically strongest and largest of ponies Pegasi were known for their light bodies and lithe form.

Ditzy’s form was a bit more on the thick side with normal legs, slight pudgy, but wide hips and a nice chest. The general area of her haunches though was her best features large and spacious like a blown up bubble. She was wearing grey sleeveless dress that came down to her thighs with white splotches with a pair of block boy shorts underneath. The one feature of Ditzy that made her stood out was that she was in fact crossed eye which mixed in with her infamous clumsiness and her simple nature earned her a lot of ire and bullying through much of her childhood. As a result she had few friends as most people avoided the mare because of the unfortunate bad luck that tends to occur when Ditzy popped up.

Considering his own lonely childhood Naruto had bonded with Ditzy almost instantly. The muffin-loving mail mare he personally felt qualified as the Element of Kindness, but he needed to do some more research. After helping Ditzy put away the groceries and talking a bit more, to which Ditzy happily volunteered to help clean up after the Summer Festival bid them farewell, promising to come to the party Ditzy was planning for her oldest Amethyst Star when she graduated from Celestia’s School for Gifted Unicorns.

Naruto took a brief glance at the Criteria Celestia had given him. A bond between the bearers was important. Carrot as Generosity and Ditzy as Kindness would fit two out of five of the ponies, but there was the problem of the fact Ditzy had no ties to the others. If the Elements of Harmony were to be a united force then they were going to need a connection.

After bidding goodbye to the two mares he made his way home. Remembering Carrot Top’s statement Naruto decided to go pay a visit to Applejack tomorrow. Naruto made his way to his current place of residence. A large two-story building with lavish trends and with a theme one would instantly mistake as circus theme. The colors of the building consisted of cerulean, golden, diamond and silver shades for a good deal of its outline with pink and other shades of violets using for such things as the curtain and horse mannequins outfits. Columns of intersecting colors of gold and mulberry made up the solid infrastructure of the building.

The crystal like clear glasses and an orange flag on top a red shaped heart was one of the emblems above the golden horse shaped emblem above the home adorn with pink and violet hearts. This building made up Naruto’s place of residence a few weeks after he arrived to Ponyville. A good deal of his money he earned doing odd jobs here and their across Ponyville seeing as his explanation for his mark didn’t translate well into a working career.

“Rarity I’m home.” Naruto called out as he walked further into the building. While the other homes were a bit more on the rustic side Rarity’s home was more fitting of a place one would expect from Canterlot. The rooms had a small collection of, elaborate paintings hang from the walls and the fresh scent of flowers floats buoyantly throughout the rooms, with the windows covered by a pair of dark red curtains, allowing no more than a sliver of the sun’s rays to filter into any room at a simple time.

“Bienvenue à la maison Naruto,” a voice called out in a language known as Phrench. His roommate slash boss slash friend was rather well-known for her classiness and the fact she followed nearly all things trendy. By far she was one of the most attractive women Naruto had ever seen and one of the few to initially got a reaction out of Naruto during his adjustment phase.

Dark nylon stockings tightly gripped against her long, slender legs; a black business skirt up against her shapely hips that swayed this way and that with an almost practiced grace about them; and to top it off, a sleeveless white blouse showing just enough of her ample cleavage. Her fur was soft looking and white as snow with the faint smell of perfumes and other productive radiating off the model like mare who had a hand rested on her well-defined hip. Rarity, out of all the mares he knew, worked on not only being ladylike, but also worked to keep up his figure. More than once the blond had to pry his eyes from her backside.

Rarity’s kept form was more as a result of conditioning than that of the usual body type of a Unicorn without magic alteration that was.

Of the three pony times Unicorns were often the most average and slim of the tribes seeing as their magic had them do the least physical labor of the three tribes. As a result that often left them with the weakest bodies of the three having to rely on their magic to make up the difference.

She greeted the blond with a friendly hug, dark lavender hair framing around her stunningly beautiful face in a stylized Coiffure as it was called.

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“Hello to you too Rarity enjoy having your home to yourself while I was gone?” he lightly teased.

“Well it was definitely quiet.” She replied to his teasing with a wry quip. “Did you enjoy your trip?”

“Yeah indeed, I really didn’t have much time for pleasure. It was more of a business trip than anything.” He answered as Rarity nodded. She then beckons him to the kitchen so she could continue asking him questions. Rarity was without a very kind hostess and great friend. Upon really thinking about it Rarity was a more than ideal candidate for the element of Generosity.

Only problem was she had no connection to Ditzy or Carrot Top. He went over his thoughts again with Ditzy and Cheerilee for Kindness with Rarity and Golden for Generosity. He decided to see if he could find some of the other Elements tomorrow to help narrow down his choices.

That morning Naruto woke up to the smell of breakfast. That was a smell he always welcomed as he got washed up and dressed for the day. He entered the kitchen and there waiting for him was pancakes, eggs, along with a bowl of fruit. Rarity as always had a light meal of fruit and toast with a bowl of oatmeal.

Per usual they would finish their meal before they began to talk. As usual Rarity’s mane was in its usual up do, her outfit lint free and freshly ironed. There was definitely a perfectionist’s mentality to the way she did things. Rarity once again expressed her interest in Naruto’s trip to which he gave her an edited version of the details. “One of the main things that still needs doing is to find some volunteers to help decorate Town Hall and the area around it. The thing is the money for the decorations will be costly.”

“Why I see how that would pose a problem. “ Rarity paused as she began thinking about an idea that could help saw this problem. Suddenly her eyes slightly widen and her face later lit up as a thought came to her mind . “Idea!~” Rarity sang out the word in a cheerful little melody. “I have plenty of old threads and other decorations in my work room. I would be more than happy to not only give them in fact I would be more than happy to volunteer my services for the festival. “

“That’s very kind of you Rarity. Finding someone for decorations was one of the biggest concerns and I’m sure the mayor will be glad to hear you’ll be the one handling it.” As a seamstress, Rarity knew a great deal about designs, colors, and anything within those fields. If there was a pony who you would count on for decoration then it was someone whose field was similar to that.

Naruto was now more than sure that Rarity was the Element of Generosity. Since today seemed to be a slow day, Rarity didn’t have many tasks for Naruto so he carried on and made his way to Sweet Apple Acres.

The Apple farm was by far larger than Carrot Top’s farm. The Apples not only harvested and sold apples but also took care of livestock. The workers consisted of Applejack and Big Macintosh with Granny Apple as the elder that oversaw the business side of things. Also cute little Apple Bloom also lived on the farm, occasionally helping out on the farm. Many of the Apple Clan were located throughout Equestria with their relatives going into the hundreds.

The Apples were among his closest friends; in fact he owed his life to Applejack and Mac. Naruto took a glance at the porch where the apple green Granny Smith Apple would often spend her time rocking peacefully in her chair. That infamous squeak with each forward tilt that accompanied the rocking motions was one that would enter the mind and never leave. He continued searching around for hide or hair of the other apples. He knew around this time Apple Bloom would be in school which meant AJ and Mac were working the farm.

Finally he came across the form of Big Mac carrying a large bale of Hay with one arm. In terms of raw physical strength there wasn’t a pony in Ponyville that could beat Big Mac; he was second to none in terms of endurance either. He was tall enough to loom over most ponies, he was easily seven feet tall. His complexion was that of a deep brilliant Amaranth. Naruto would soon come to learn that knowing shades of color was a very important part of equine culture because they, along with features or talents, played the role that names would have in identifying your ancestral heritage.

Anyway he hands down was one of the hardest working ponies in Ponyville. His red flannel shirt seared at the ends and stained with sweat. It clung to his torso accentuating his broad and muscular chest and pectorals. Despite lacking any formal training Big Mac’s body was well-defined from all the farm work leading to him developing a muscular and attractive body. It was further highlighted by the holes in his jeans that showed off hints of his muscular legs. His brilliant orange mane and sap green eyes completed his farm boy look.

His rather quiet and reserved nature along with his respectful demeanor earned him more admirers than the average stallion. It would be unfounded to say at least a third of the mares, if not more of the mares, of Ponyville either fancied or were attracted to Big Mac, but seeing as Ponyville was one of the most heavily mare populated settlements in the Pony community that made the choices rather selective seeing as the Mare population heavily outnumbered the Stallion population five to one. As such it wasn’t an uncommon practice for those in certain communities to have members that formed herds.

“Hey there Mac!” Naruto greeted the worker as he adjusted his stride to match his own.

“Howdy.” He grunted out without breaking his stride to continue collecting the hay.

“I was wondering if the Apples have any plan for the Summer Sun Festival coming up because food preparations needs figuring out since there haven’t been any volunteers.”

“Ah wouldn’t be able to help ya, preparing for the reunion, but ah reckon Applejack would be able to aid you.” He said as he placed the hay block into the pike with the rest of them before grabbing the wagon stationed by the entrance and began dragging it outside.

“Is Applejack on the farm anywhere?” he wondered as he watched Big Mac placed buckets in the wagon that was often used to carry apples bucked from the trees.

“She’s in town sellin’.” He answered as he finished stacking all the buckets in the cart.

“Thanks Mac.” Called out with a wave as he began his journey anew back into town to find the other farm pony.

The blond made his way to Ponyville’s market center the one place where one could find it all when it came to the ingredients for your meal and where haggling skills meant the difference between a nice meal or a nice little feast with spending money for tomorrow.

“Are you serious? Only three bits?” a shocked voice asked as Naruto continued to weave around the crowd of ponies.

“Yes indeed,” a voice spoke with a strong and familiar Southern drawl.

“Wow, back in my old town Apples were fifteen bits an Apple. “

Naruto finally came upon the scene to see a cobalt blue gentleman in his late thirties with short and neatly groom jet black mane was purchasing from Applejack. He was wearing a dress pants and suit combo with small square rim glasses with his eye color a dull sort of gold. The voice he had been definitely younger than his voice indicated. The Earth Pony stallion picked up the barrel of Apples and went on his way.

“Yo AJ,” Naruto called out to the Earth Pony. The mare in question was behind a stall selling apples. She was slightly taller than him not to mention she was physically developed like her brother from all the farm work, but more in a feminine shape. She had pale light olive coloring for her mane with the same sap green eyes that all the Apples on Sweet Apple Acres had along with a light dusting of freckles on her face. Her coating was that of a light brilliant gamboge colored marred from the sweating and hard work, not to mention there were scratches and cut on her face and body from either farming accidents or creatures that would occasionally wander in from the Everfree Forest.

All and all Applejack was a country girl seeing as her outfit consisted of a red and white checkered tie-up shirt with a chest that easily rivaled Rarity’s generous bosom. The Daisy Dukes she was wearing showed off her legs thick with muscle, a defining trait of an Earth Pony. Earth ponies famed for strength and endurance were often the largest of the three pony tribes. It was also thanks to this conditioning that gave her a firm and noticeably round bottom and svelte waist that had initially gained the apple farmer a lot of admirers, but a few factors led to that thinning over time.

Applejack would only be courted by a strong and honest stallion with a worthy work ethic and considering the Apples seemed to have unusual strength even by Earth Pony standards and stubborn adherence to their ethics that meant many Stallions fell short of her standards. Despite this the Apple still had plenty of admirers who still tried to cut corners in their attempt to woo her.

In a way it actually reminded him of Rarity’s own fan base of admirers enamored by her beauty, but unfortunately for them Rarity’s standards were even higher by far. By the time he had gotten over there the mare had readjusted the Stetson hat on her head. “Well ain’t ya a sight for sore eyes. How’s your boss lady treating ya? Surprised she let ya out of the shop.”

“Come now Applejack if you get to know Rarity you’ll see she’s a perfectly nice mare.” He knew that Applejack’s experience with the high life during that time she spent with her Uncle and Aunt Orange colored her perception of the high-class. “So that last customer seemed pretty happy.” He said pointing his thumb in the same direction AJ’s previous customer went.

“Well that fellar was telling me how they were gouging the prices in the last town he and his wife lived in. I know of the regions and Apples ain’t that rare ya know. He was trying to buy mah apples for way over price and ah couldn’t, in good conscious, do that to the poor fellar.” She finished with a slight sigh. To be honest money was always a touch and go subject at Sweet Apple Acres. Especially considering that Granny Apple was getting on up there in years meaning that medically emergencies were another thing to be factored into their budget and with the growing repairs to the farm thanks to some of the creatures in the Everfree venturing near town now more than ever.

Naruto’s face softened at this. “That was incredibly kind of you Applejack.”

“Why thank yah sugarcube.” Applejack replies to your comment, before she frowns a little. “But ah’m afraid that ah may have to start bumping up the prices if the sales don’t pick up.”

Naruto then remembered why he was looking for her. “Actually Applejack that reminds me of something. I was wondering if you would be willing to cater for the Summer Sun Festival? Initially there was only going to be enough of the budget to order the decorations, but since Rarity offered to decorate town hall for free I could probably convince the mayor to use enough of the budget to cover the food bill. This could also be some nice advertisement to Sweet Apple Acres for the ponies who are going to come for the festival.”

“Sounds like a mighty fine idea ta me. Heck Mac is handling the planning’ for the reunion so why not. Ah’m sure there should be plenty of the family who’d be more than happy to help out. Count me in.”

“This is turning out easier than I would expect. The mayor will be pleased. “ he said as he placed down a bit to buy some apples.

“Why thank yah kindly partner.” Applejack smiles as she scoops up at his bits in a matter of seconds she handed him the apples.

“I’m afraid I have to leave now to find any more volunteers for the festival. I’ll be seeing you AJ.”

The cowpony nods. “Yep, you too Naruto,”

Naruto continued his way through the busy market streets. Next thing he knew a pink blur appeared out of nowhere and slams into him hard making his back kiss the pavement. It took him a moment to recollect himself when he felt a very soft, warm and heavy body press itself against his, as two very immense and cushion pillows lay against his chest. What’s more his nose could smell the odd aroma of cotton candy and cake frosting. “Hi Pinkie Pie.” He greeted without missing a beat.

“Gotcha!” she replied with a giggle. “You’re slipping up mister. You didn’t even sense me this time.”

He was so caught up in his mission he had completely forgotten about the little game between him and Pinkie. “Alright, alright you got me can you let me up now?”

Those violet orbs of hers were so full of mirth and innocence it was hard to stay mad at her. Of the other mares Naruto had gotten to know so far, Pinkie was on the shorter side with her skin a brilliant rose shade and her mane and tail a raspberry shade. Unlike the other ponies Pinkie’s mane and tail was that of an unconventional puffy style reminiscent of cotton candy. Like the others Pinkie also had a desirable shape but more unique to her energetic nature. She was shorter and far less muscled like Earth Ponies to the point many a pony or two wondered if she was lazy, but those who knew Pinkie knew there was nearly no shortage to her energy. Also with a figure like that lazy was not the word one would use. She had a nice chest for one, perky and a bit larger than average meaning so not in the leagues of Rarity or even Applejack though one wouldn’t know it from all the hyperactive bouncy the mare did.

One would think with all her snacking habit of candy and cake that Pinkie would be pudgy, but that was anything but the case. Her stomach was nice and thin, though her waist was curve if not noticeably larger than most voluptuous shape because Pinkie didn’t exercise fanatically or worked out like most would but that didn’t stop her from having a more hourglass shape from the waist down. No, all that sugar did in fact went somewhere and it was that plump ass of hers. If Pinkie hadn’t been known as something of a loon about town she would probably have just as many admirers if not more so than a lot of the other mayors. Unfortunately her highly energetic and sometimes over friendly demeanor made her off-putting to a lot of ponies. Her outfit consisted of a white T-shirt with the words “Party Girl” bold in gold stopping short of her midriff along with a pair of form-fitting Blue Jeans. A stark contrast to her usual yellow skirt or shorts she would have usually worn on her days off.

Naruto, unaware that he was starting quite attentively at Pinkie, wondered why he didn’t think about asking for her health.

“Looks like someone likes what he sees!” Pinkie smirked mischievously, very much amused by the embarrassment forming on Naruto’s face.

“Pinkie,” Naruto mumbled with an embarrassed blush. He still hadn’t quite fully worked out his own thoughts and feelings about this situation. He would be blind not to notice how attractive the mares are, they were bipedal and it was those similar features that helped Naruto better adapt to this society, but he was still adapting and getting used to being a pony so when it came to romance it was one of the things he had on the back burner.

“So! Did you enjoy checking me out?” she teased earning an annoyed sigh from the blond. With someone who didn’t have much dating experience she sure was an expert at teasing him. She and Rainbow Dash had that much in common at least.

“Yes actually, feels like someone might need to go bra shopping soon.” He shot back in hopes of embarrassing her but instead she reacted in typical Pinkie Pie faction.

“You really think so?” she asked, groping her chest and began fondling them with up and down motions.

Naruto’s blush intensified. Only Pinkie Pie could turn his pranks and verbal jabs back on him. Then again it was one of the things he liked best about her. She was a completely honest and sweet mare that saw the best in everything.

She was the Element of Laughter bar none. He didn’t even really have to think about who’d he pick for that one if he was honest.

“Hey Pinkie who do you think is the most loyal pony in town?” he wondered as he began to notice a trend in his choices.

Pinkie pulled out what she called her thinking cap, which was essentially a mini graduates hat and began thinking. “Well there’s the Apples who are very loyal to their family, oh and Cheerilee she’s so nice always doing her best to educate the little colts and fillies, and there’s Mayor Mare whose always doing her best for the town, and the Cakes they’re super nice and awesome and always dedicated to each other, and Shoeshine always take time to listen to those she cares about, and Note Worthy is…”

“Pinkie calm down.” He forcibly placed his hand over the mare’s mouth. “Pinks!” he called out as she insisted on talking through his hand. She titled her head quizzically and finally stopped talking. “Who do you think among everyone that, no matter what, values being loyal to all else? Can you remember anyone making a major decision to standby someone else?” after he asked that Pinkie immediately began talking to which he had to remove his hand.

“…here so she could stay here with Fluttershy because Fluttershy is so sweet, but really sensitive and…”

“Wait…start again. Who are we talking about?” he asked.

She looked at him as if he just told her a bad joke. “What do you mean? Rainbow Dash silly, don’t you remember?”

Naruto literally face palmed at the fact he didn’t realize this himself. Of course…without Pinkie’s help it would have probably taken him weeks to realize this seeing as Loyalty was one of the hardest traits to figure out or test. Unlike Generosity, Kindness, or Honesty you couldn’t easily test or see that being exhibited as an everyday trait. Loyalty itself was something one could only show during a major event or decision for it to truly be any test of that characteristic.

Rainbow Dash was one of the first ponies he had met. Who he owed his life too and as time went on he got to know a great deal about her. She was close to the Pegasus known as Fluttershy who was truer to her name than most. In fact Rainbow Dash moving to Ponyville was a result of being close to Fluttershy, one of the only two friends Rainbow Dash had made at the academy with her being Fluttershy’s only friend. Considering Rainbow Dash’s own dream one would think she would have a better chance at achieving it by staying in Cloudsdale's but her concern for the other Pegasus saw her moved to this very town.

“Thanks Pie!” Naruto scooped the mare into an energetic hug causing her to let out a little yelp in joy. He was almost sure now.

Generosity = Rarity

Loyalty = Rainbow Dash

Laughter = Pinkie Pie

Honesty = Applejack

Kindness = ?

In fact even if the mares minimally knew each other it was better than his alternative choices. Seeing as Rainbow Dash spent most days either working or snoozing she didn’t socialize unless it was to buy groceries or find out what was going on in town. Pinkie Pie knew all of them because of her nature and once in a while Applejack surely had sold her apples to the other mares. At best they would be casual acquaintances with Ditzy when she delivered their mail and only Applejack and Rarity would have had any contact with Cheerilee due to their younger siblings being in her class.

If one would really think about it who else in Ponyville would really fit the trait of Kindness other than Fluttershy. She was extremely soft-spoken and loving with her talent of taking care of animals. He couldn’t think of a kinder talent than working in the medical field.

He decided he was going to pay Fluttershy a visit tomorrow and see if she was willing to volunteer for the festival. He didn’t even need to ask Pinkie Pie as the moment she saw Twilight in the town she was going to insist on throwing her a party. Everything was coming along he would just need to send the Princess a letter on his thoughts on who the five elements were.

Equestrian Heroes! Chapter 2! Finding the Elements
Naruto takes the chance to live a second more peaceful life. Ending up in a world of  magic he must now must learn  the customs and make the best of things in this strange new world.  During this he befriends  Twilight and the other Elements of Harmony along with the many other ponies in Equestria. A story where laughter is shared, tears are shed, and the bonds of friendship and love are tested in this reimagining.  Despite the gore tag it won't be needlessly gruesome or torture of our favorite ponies.

In this second chapter Naruto goes on a look out for the other Five bearers.

Chapter 1

Equestrian Heroes! Ch 1! The Princess's Request!Equestrian Heroes
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I’ve been thinking about and considering how I wanted to do this story for six months now. I’ve almost got everything figured out to a tee, so I hope you guys enjoy this remake of the story. I decided to make everyone Anthro in this revision because it would make writing certain scenes easier. I hope not to lose anyone as I will be putting a greater focus on developing the ties between characters.
This fic is also going to include Loads and Loads of characters. I want to do my best to give backstory and dimensions to every pony so it could be jumping point to other pairings I wish to do.
I also wanted to put a stronger emphasis on how long and well the characters know each other. I hope you guys enjoy this remake as more content and thought was put into it.
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VoGoshinki Featured By Owner 4 days ago
Whats up?
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VoGoshinki Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2015
So, how was your day?
VoGoshinki Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2015
I want to apologize for my earlier behavior a few days ago.That day was a long one when that happened, but that doesn't excuse how I acted. Your one of my favorite authors, and I should have been more mature in my reaction.

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VoGoshinki Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2014
Hows your computer fix coming along?
TheRealKyuubi16 Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2015
In the future, please pick characters that actually have some information I can work with. 
VoGoshinki Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2015
You did chapters with Bambietta before, so I didn't know there was an issue.
TheRealKyuubi16 Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2015
There isn't a lot of information to go on for her. She has little to no backstories or interest. So I'm going to have to sit down and try to figure out backgrounds and such.
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TheRealKyuubi16 Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2014
Its fixed, I can start writing the chapters now. Have to start over from scratch though. 
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