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Warrior of the Omnitrix
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A youth with short brown hair was sitting on a bus bench. He was of Caucasian descent and average built, his name, Benjamin Kirby Tennyson, who preferred the name Ben. He was looking at a picture in his hand, one of his cousin and she was a sight to behold.

One of the first things that stood out about her was her fiery orange hair, it was short in length, to about her upper back with a single bang protruding on the left side of her face. She had sparkly light green eyes that were captivating. She also wore a shirt that was a mixture of dark blue around the sleeves and shoulders and light blue covering the rest of her torso and sizable breasts. Her stomach was flat and well defined from taking Karate, attached to a pair of wide and curvy hips. Hips showed off by her almost skin tight white pants. Puberty definitely hit head on when it came to his girl.

Earlier that day he had already packed and placed his things in the rust bucket, the nickname for Grandpa Max's RV. He was tall and surprisingly fit for his age. The man was in his sixties, the most obvious sign being his gray hair, though some would credit this to his service as a Plumber.

Unlike in the traditional since, the Plumbers he worked for was a special corps of planetary protectors against hostile Aliens. Of course there was more then just fighters as the organization also contained, scientists, weapon makers, and individuals skilled in other fields that would be used to ensure the safety of the planet. He heard from his 'aunt' and 'uncle' that Gwen was in the town taking care of some business so he decided to go and pick her up from there, since he volunteered to pick her up in the first place.

After checking a few places he finally cornered her in a book store. ''How's my cousin Gwennykins doing?'' He asked with a grin. He could feel her annoyance, her frown from behind the book she was reading.

''Buzz off I have better things to do then babysit you dork.'' When they were younger they didn't get along like kids would at that age. It was a love-hate relationship between the siblings, but with age came maturity and differences were worked out.

''Don't be that way Gwennykins. You know you missed me.'' he teased her with a teasing grin. It was funny as either meaning could have been worked to piss her off.

''You're annoying. Have I ever told you that Ben?'' She asked flipping a page.

'Ben' cocked his head. It took some time for him to get used to aliases at first. After all in his original life as Naruto very few people referred to him as that until he was fifteen years old. ''Yeah…just about every other time we see each other. Come on…what's with the whole love-hate thing? I thought we moved past that…what happened to being good friends?''

Gwen scoffed and rolled her eyes. ''Yet you insist on taking every chance to take a dig at me. Albeit we're no longer at each others throats when we were younger doesn't mean I necessarily like you initially anymore then I used to. We're just family and just because I have to love you doesn't mean I have to like you.''

Ben could hear her trying to hold back a laugh. He was able to ell me the sudden change in her breathing pattern. It amazed him how many things it was possible to tell or could be learn form shinobi training. How many things were over looked. ''Aaw Gwennykins loves me! Anyway! Got yourself a boyfriend yet?''

''None of your business.'' she snapped, feeling herself becoming rather annoyed at the fact Ben was prodding.

''I take that as a no...my guess was on the first day you sought out the biggest and meanest one and kicked his ass to scare all the stragglers way huh?''

''You know what,'' Gwen slammed her book close. ''I'm not talking to you anymore.'' She said as she hhmped and went to pay for her books.

Over ten minutes had passed and the fiery red? or was it orange haired girl continued the silent treatment.

''So…'' He tried to start a conversation but nothing seemed to work. Gwen remained silent despite Ben's attempts to get her to talk.

''Come on Gwen…you know I was just teasing, you know, like I always do.'' He said trying to get her to speak.

''I know…doesn't mean you have to be such a pain thought. '' She murmured softly in response to his teasing. She folded her arms.

Ben opened his mouth to make a comment when Gwen shot him a look that promised much pain if he continued, so he promptly closed it. ''I'm hungry…let's get something to eat.'' he suggested as Gwen agreed. If Ben was going to pay for it she might as well take him up on the offer. The place he suggested was nearby so they walked there, remaining silent.

Ben silently sobbed as he felt his wallet become lighter. In order to earn Gwen's forgiveness he offered to treat her to anything she wanted... on him. She happened to pick a nice restaurant of course. He ordered the Steak meal, with salad, potatoes, corn, and Pepsi.

''So mean…yes she is,'' He whispered to his formally fat, but now skinny wallet. He ordered Burger and Fries with Sprite as a drink. They talked about things, normal things like school and stuff.

While they were eating a couple guys from across the room were eying Gwen and they came over. They looked to be the typical type of punks, maybe part of a low brow gang sense there style consisted of mismatched clothes, in poor condition and black leather jackets, the only decent thing on them if you counted in the piercings and messed up hair styles, mostly Mohawks.

The leader was apparent because he was the tallest, 6'3 with orange hair and four nose piercings. ''Hey there cutie, why don't ya you ditch the looser I'll show you what its like to be with real man!'' he said with a self assured smirk. He radiated cocky and aggressive and was definitely not the sort of guy Gwen would be into.

''You're calling me a loser? You look dirt poor, your grammar is…I don't even have to get started and to be honest it looks like all the rejects from different gangs banned together to form there own gang…albeit very badly.''

Gwen giggled at what Ben said and looked at the guy and looked him in the eye, "Buzz off Ass-hole, a real man in my opinion wouldn't look poor, would be educated, and fairly attractive. Now can you go away, I'm trying to enjoy my food and looking at you is making it hard to keep it down.''

The guys behind the leader began making comments, chiding their leader.

''Damn!''

''She told you!''

''You going to let her talk to you like that?''

The leader became enraged at the comments as his first flushed in anger. '' YOU LITTLE BITCH! NO ONE TALKS TO ME LIKE THAT! I'LL…'' He never got to finish as a fist connected with his jaw with a sickening crunch. His body flew through the air and landed on the ground with an audible thump and crack. Ben hopped out of his seat and walked over to the groaning thug. '

''No one! And I mean no one talks to my Gwen like that! You got it you piece of shit!'' Ben's anger boiled as his none vacant hand twitched slightly. His eyes flashing to cerulean blue briefly then a moment later crimson red. The thug nodded furiously as he began to sweat. Ben dropped the thug and snarled at the other members who fled like the cowards they were.

Gwen was amazed at what happened. She had never seen Ben so angry…ok maybe she had but never over her. She rubbed her wrist where the thug grabbed her and was amazed how far Ben sent him with that punch. She also started to blush when she remembered the words 'My Gwen' and wandered what he meant? Surely he meant as cousins, that's it! She concluded that was what he meant.

''You okay?'' She heard him asked, in response she nodded. She dismissed what she heard and decided to finish her meal and not put too much thought into it.

Warrior of the Omnitrix! Ch 1! The Two Cousins!
It was supposed to be a simple camping trip until Ben Tennyson finds a mysterious device in the woods. Now he must contend with aliens, mutants, and other dangerous creatures while also contending with some creature that seems to know him. What secrets is Ben hiding and what will that mean for his life on Earth?
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The Sage at the Gakuen Academy

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Naruto x Harem

Tsukune x Harem

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Romez has given me permission to use several of his themes for my story. This is a brand new and updated remake of Kitsune and Gakuen, I hope you guys enjoy it.

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Naruto slowly began to wake up and began stretching his arms. He rubbed the sleep crust from his eyes as he sat up. All things considering this afternoon was rather boring, a perfect lay about sort of a day.

He was starting to regret his decision to relive his childhood as a civilian in this world, but what else could he do? This was far more boring than anything he had to do as the Seventh Hokage. Being a civilian student sucked way more than the seemingly endless amount of Paperwork that came with being the village leader.

Unlike Hagoromo after his first natural life had passed Naruto wasn't someone who could simply just sit and observe. He had to get out where the action was.

'Yeah? Action.' He mentally grumbled as he realized he should have learned more about this world besides that there were monsters in it. He decided he spent enough time on the roof and dropped down to the ground. He began making his way to the library when he heard muted shouts outside by the entrance. He shuffled over towards the door, suddenly curious as to what was happening.

As he got closer he heard the unmistakable sounds of shuffling feet and sniffling. Sniffling? Someone was crying outside. He started off in a rush to the origin of the noise. If there was one thing Naruto refused to tolerate, it was bullying.

The rising anger inside him bubbled over as he saw the scene unfold in front of him. A petite pink haired girl was laying on the floor curled into a ball to try and protect herself as a horde of kids kicking at her. The mixed group of boys and girls taunted the girl and shouted things at her like, "Loser!" and "Freak!" whilst continuing their assault on her.

Naruto was outraged. Kicking up a rock he followed up with a second kick that sent it flying and nailing one of the kids in the shoulder. The boy dropped to his knees with a startled cry as he clutched his shoulder and began to wail. "Leave, now!" He yelled. The other members of the group stopped their assault to turn and glare daggers at the boy. When Naruto crossed the distance faster than they could comprehend they began to lose nerve.

Naruto bent down to the girl to see if she was okay. "Are you okay?" He asked as the girl sighed away from him. "It's okay, I won't hurt you." he helped her sit up. He noticed her send a fearful glance at the kids and decided it was time to go. Scooping her up in his arms he decided to find a place where he could talk with her.

Taking the girl back to his napping spot he introduced himself. "My name is Uzumaki Naruto. Are you alright?" he asked as the girl nodded.

"Y-Yeah." She answered with a sniffle. "Why did you help me?"

Naruto raised an eyebrow. "Why wouldn't I?" He wondered. "Why were those kids picking on you? Was it because your hair?" he asked as a frown formed on the girl's lips.

"N-No…I…" she hesitated unwilling to divulge any further. "Y-You'll just make fun of me like the others. Everyone already thinks I'm a freak." She said as she brought her knees to her chin.

"Try me….I've seen some weird things."

"Have you…have you ever wondered if monsters were real?" She timidly asked as recognition flickered in Naruto's eyes.

"Oh, so you're a monster. That explains it." He casually stated shocking the girl.

"W-What?" The girl was obviously shocked at how easily and calmly he was accepting it. "Y-You aren't scared or hate me?"

"Well, let's just say while I'm not a monster I'm not a normal human myself." He replied with a grin. "So what kind of monster are you?"

"A vampire." She answered.

"Huh? Wow you look nothing like a vampire or at least what I heard of. You're even out in the day. Aah in fact would you be willing to tell me all about them…eer. What was your name?" He asked, realizing that he didn't even get her name.

"M-Moka. Akashiya Moka." She introduced herself. "Y-You're really okay with me being a Vampire?" she seemed to be in disbelief of the whole situation still.

"Of course. I'd be a crappy friend if I didn't." He responded as Moka's eyes widened.

"Y-You really want to be my friend?" She asked as the blond nodded.

"I don't see why not?" He said as he watched a smile broke out on Moka's face.

"I…I would like that." And with that a new friendship was formed.

The Sage at the Gakuen Academy! Ch 1!
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Naruto found himself jolted awake thanks to the bumpy motion of the bus. Sitting up he began glancing out the window. He couldn't help but be a bit bored. At the very least going to this academy will be far more interesting than it was a civilian school. He picked at the clothing he was wearing, a school uniform consisting of a white collared shirt, brown pants, a green blazer and a black tie.

He was a bit annoyed there wasn't a hint of orange in it. He also had to admit he was interested in who the hell this headmaster was and how he managed to track Naruto down to deliver this invitation to the academy. Either way the man was obviously a monster, either a powerful one or one well connected.

That just made the things all the more interesting. While he enjoyed peace he also hated being bored. Glancing out the window once more he took notice that they were no longer in the city.

He couldn't help but wonder was he really the only person that was going to pick up? It felt like the bus had been going for hours and he was the only one laying against these rather hard seats.

He closed his eyes and simply just tried to put his mind off things when the bus came to the stop. To his surprise the doors open and someone walked up, a boy walked in with a bag slung over his shoulder. He had black hair, brown eyes and wore the same uniform that Naruto himself was wearing. Nothing special about him.

"So you're Aono Tsukune?" The bus driver asked, his glowing eyes freaking the boy out slightly.

"Y-yes, I am." Tsukune replied as he gave the bus driver a nervous smile while the doors behind him closed.

Naruto paid little of the conversation between the boy and bus driver. Since the boy sat within speaking distance Naruto introduced himself.

"Uzumaki Naruto, I was beginning to think I would be the only one riding this bus" He tended his hand.

"Aono Tsukune." Tsukune took the offered hand and shook it with a smile on his face, internally glad that he was able to meet a seemingly nice person on his first day. "So are you a first year as well?"

"I am actually, so this is going to be a rather interesting experience. What I'm really looking forward to is meeting up with an old friend of mine who's also going?"

"Really? What is your friend like?"

"Well for one she's really sweet and a nice cook. Actually a bit too nice for her own good, but she has a good heart. She has distinct pink hair and has some unusual tastes. Her name is Moka, like the café drink."

"Wow, she sound's nice." Tsukune replied.

"You two best prepare yourselves." The bus driver suddenly said, gaining both teen's attention. "As soon as we exit this tunnel we'll be out the front of Yokai Academy." Whether they needed the time to prepare themselves or not, they didn't get the chance to, for as soon as the creepy bus driver finished speaking they exited the tunnel and the bus stopped. The bus driver huckled in that eerily creepy way once more as the two grabbed their things and made their way off of the bus. "You two have fun now, and do be careful."

Naruto was rather impassive to the scary warning while Tsukune started to freak out. Off to the side of them was a scarecrow with a pumpkin as a head, it had the front of it carved out as if it was ready for halloween. A fair distance in front of them was a large building, which had lightning appear behind it almost a second later, Naruto presumed it was the school while Tsukune just turned around to face the bus and roared with all he had.

"WHAT IS THIS PLACE?! WHERE THE HELL DID YOU DROP US?!" The black-haired boy then turned around to study the school building more thoroughly; his eyebrow twitching slightly. "I-it looks like a haunted mansion..."

"Relax," Naruto told him, an amused expression forming on his face. "The staff seems to be rather eccentric or maybe they're preparing for Halloween. Unless you want to be late I suggest you hurry up." He remarked as he began walking ahead.

Reluctant, Tsukune began following after him.

Seeing a path Naruto continued making his way down when a feminine scream drew his attention. "Coming Through out of the WAY!"

Naruto turned as he saw a bicycle and pink barreling towards him. Naruto merely raised his arm and scooping the figure off the bike by her midsection as the pink went tumbling in the bushes.

The girl in question was a teenager with cherry blossom pink hair flowing down her back. She had deep green eyes and wore a green of an eye-sore blazer over a white blouse with a plaid skirt that parted enough to show her undergarments which only serve to make her look all the more arousing. Around her neck was a rosary with a red jewel in the center of it.

The girl in question gazed up at the person whose arms she was in. A faint blush formed on her cheeks.

"Hey there Moka-chan, looks like you filled out a bit more since I last saw you."

"N-Naruto!" She couldn't stop herself as her hand met his cheek causing the blond to let her go, laughing his ass off. "I haven't seen you in a year and that's the first thing you say!?" She finished in a huff, her cheeks burning and her arms folded.

"Come on Moka-chan, I was just messing around." He did his best pout but the vampire refused to meet him. "Hhm, however could I ever get Moka-chan to forgive me?" he asked as he grabbed her arm and spun her around. "Maybe let her have her favorite meal?" he asked as he saw the Pinkette's eyes light up.

"R-really? Are you sure?" Naruto had only let her drink his blood sparingly because of how often she had went out of the way to taste some in the past. Because of that Moka treasured the moments she could drink his blood. With the nod of permission, she pounced. "Capu-chu!" She wrapped her arms around his neck and sunk her fangs into it while Naruto wrapped his arms around her waist to keep her steady as she drank away.

Tsukune's jaw broke through the ground as his face heated up at what the two were doing.

"Oh right," He sheepishly remarked remembering they weren't alone. "Tsukune-san this is my friend Moka-chan." He introduced the vampire hanging off his neck.

The girl moaned and pushed her body against Naruto's even more as she happily drank his blood. It had been so long since she had some. The best part was since Naruto could regenerate Moka could more than have her fair share during those rare feedings.

Naruto patted her back to which Moka pulled her fangs from his neck. She happily licked her lips and let out a content sigh as she placed her hand on her stomach. A blush rose to her cheeks as her eyes practically glazed over. "So gooood." She then remembered what Naruto was saying earlier. "Aah." Moka's blush deepened as she remembered someone else was there. "H-Hello I'm Akashiya Moka nice to meet you…" she said with a bow.

"You…he…b-bite…" The boy stammered as he pointed at the Pinkette. "Vampire! You're a Vampire!" he exclaimed.

"Why yes she is and a rather gluttonous one at that." He said as Moka let out a whine.

"Naruto-kun, so mean." She said with a pout. "Anyway nice to meet you Tsukune-san." Her eyes then widened. "Oh, we're going to be late." She suddenly remembered why she was rushing. "Oh my bike, where's my bike." She said as she began searching through the bushes.

"Human…Monsters...even across dimensions. It always surprises me they always manage to make the skirts so short." Naruto murmured to himself as his eyes traveled along Moka's legs.

"Naruto-kun, help me." She cried out to the blond.

"Alright, alright." He said as he turned to Tsukune. "You might want to hurry on ahead before you're late. We'll see you later.

Still stunned and confused by what he had just witnessed Tsukune took the suggestion and hurried on ahead.

It took the two a few minutes to find the bike and readjust the chains to it was usable. The two of them happily chat as they made their way to the academy. The two of them had to unfortunately go separate ways so they could pick up their schedules.

"Hello everyone, welcome to Youkai Academy, I'm your Home Room teacher, Nekonome Shizuka," stated a very attractive woman, with blondish-yellowish hair that had two tufts near the top that resembled cat ears. She wore a white blouse, an orange skirt, low heel sandals and a pair of glasses.

Naruto was smiling happily as he listened on, 'The teacher is really friendly, and cute to boot, I think I'm gonna like it here.'

Shizuka continued, "I'm sure everyone here already knows, but Youkai Academy is a school for monsters".

Naruto nodded as he tried to keep the grin off his face. He couldn't wait to learn about the different kinds of monsters.

'M-monsters?!' Tsukune thought as he gulped slightly. 'Wait a minute, Does that mean Naruto-san's a monster too?

"As of now, the world is ruled my humans, so, this school was most likely built to teach monsters like us to co-exist with humans." Shizuka walked, more like skipped, over to the words on the board and pointed at them with her pointer.

''In order for us monsters to continue to survive, we have no choice but to continue to peacefully coexist with the humans. The Earth has already come under the control of the humans! At this academy, you will be studying 'How to coexist with humans! So for that reason, as a school rule you will all live your lives at this academy in human form! Do you understand? It's a matter of being able to disguise yourself well as a human! This is the foundation of coexistence. You are never to allow any of your fellow students to know your 'true form' understand!''

''Hey Teacher, would it not be better for us to eat those puny humans and in the case of beautiful girls, better to molest them.'' Some scruffy looking guy with lips piercing asked. ''Humans are nothing more than trash for us monster. If you're weak then you're life means nothing more than being playthings for the strong.''

Naruto let out a snarl at him as his demonic energy threaten to spill. He hated beasts like that, those who didn't feel remorse for anyone and treated people like objects. He could feel the uneasiness of many male and female students alike. It was obvious that these students made up the weaker monsters and were part of the endless cycle that has been endlessly shitted on by the strong and élite as they were called.

''You're nothing more than a filthy beast.'' Naruto coldly remarked to the monster with the piercing.

''What did you say punk?'' the punk monster teen with piercings demanded.

''You're a filthy beast and beings like you disgust me.'' he spat out as several students gasped. Saizou Komiya was well-known among several students as a delinquent who had several run-ins with the law and was currently serving probation.

''Why you little shit.'' Saizou got out of his seat and kicked it to the side. "I'm going to pound you into mush.''

''P-Please! This is the first day!'' it was obvious by Nekonome's demeanor she was not a violent monster by nature. Nervousness was rolling off of her and fear was not something a monster should show as it was a sign of weakness.

''Oi! Quiet you spineless pussy! We're about to get some action.'' one boisterous student commented which quickly followed with the room being drowned in an intense, murderous aura. Before anyone knew what happened the student went flying into a window, half his body crashing through the window and hanging out of it.

The female half of the class couldn't help but feel visibly uncomfortable in their seats. If by the way they squirmed was a visible sign of what they were thinking. Even Nekonome fidgeted uncomfortably where she stood. Sexual harassment and lewd comments were as common as the very students that inhabited the school. Tensions remained high as everyone waited for the blond or Saizou to make the first move. The pierced monster took a glance at the monster hanging out the window, one of his crew and calculated his chances on winning; especially if a member of the safety commission got involved and Koyou got involved. Saizou might have been a thug, but he wasn't a brainless fool and reluctantly backed down, mentally promising to cause harm to the blond later.

''Scuse me!'' A familiar voice said from the hallway. ''Sorry I'm late…'' Moka said as she entered the doorway. The tensions that were filling the room earlier had come to a stop as everyone began focusing on the pretty newcomer.

''Oh that's fine just take a seat,'' Nekonome said with a relaxed exhale that the situation seemed to dispel.

''Ok!'' Moka replied with a friendly smile as she stepped in and looked around for a place she could sit.

Of course when she entered the class the guys starting drooling like idiots and commented on her beauty.

"That girl is hot..."

"She's totally cute..."

"I agree..."

When Naruto finally saw who it was he smiled and waved, "Hey, Moka-chan!" Moka turned to see who was calling her, when she saw her friend waving at her resulting in her eyes lighting up with complete and utter joy as she found the owner of it. Without a moment's hesitance she moved at him in a rapid pace and pulled the blond out of his seat, squeezing him affectionately against her body. "Naruto-kun, we're in the same class, oh I'm so happy." she said with a squeal. Things continued on without much incident. Naruto promised to hang out with Moka later but first he wanted to talk with their teacher.

''Nekonome-sensei a word,'' he called out to the woman, startling her. He could hear her heartbeat quicken and notice how stiff her body went. ''Nekonome-sensei I hope you can forgive me for my actions earlier. I took notice of the comfort of my fellow students and let my own emotional behavior override what my mind was telling me. I hope you don't think I was trying to dismiss your authority, but it looked like you needed a little help.''

Nekonome's nerves began to unwind as that biting terror she felt from before melt away. The threatening aura from before that nearly left her paralyzed was now nothing more than a fading memory as standing before her was a gentle warmth that sent tingles down her spine. Seeing as it was her first year as a teacher Nekonome was plenty worried about her performance and that shown. Considering how incomplete her disguise was and that she wasn't exactly the brightest monster her job prospects were rather limited.

And when Naruto took her hand and kiss it, Nekonome couldn't help but flush. ''It's okay Naruto-kun, please don't let it happen again.'' she commented as she hoped he didn't catch the sight of her wagging tail, betraying the effect he was having on her. Nekonome resisted the urge to pout as the blond drew back his hand.

''Okay sensei,'' he said before biding her farewell and went to join Moka. With class over Naruto and Moka began traveling the halls as they tried to find a bending machine to get something to drink. During it all Moka closed the distance between them as she took notice of the looks everyone, especially the boys were giving her. While she was in human school most kids made fun of her; not only because of her help that monsters were real, but the fact that her bubblegum pink hair was not natural among humans so it made her stick out. So of course because of this, being an outcast among humans she never really considered herself beautiful enough to draw the fuss she was receiving today with ogling eyes and lustful looks.

Though, Naruto's rather possessive gaze and threatening looks made most of the students to think twice about approaching them. Finally they walked outside and went over by some tables with umbrellas with a nice view of the forest surrounding the school. Finally they came across a bending machine that served hot drinks.

Moka took a sip of her drink and smiled, "It's delicious, isn't it?" she asked.

"Yeah," he answered as he sat his drink down. "I'll be right back. Try and stay out of trouble," He playfully teased her as he went to the bathroom.

To her surprise moments later Tsukune was walking by looking nervous and miserable. "Tsukune-san, hey over here," she waved him over. He seemed to take notice of her and reluctantly walked over. "Naruto-kun and I didn't see you after class. What happened?"

"Nothing I was…I was…" he shifted his eyes, trying to think of an excuse. "…just trying to find my way around the school."

"Oh," Moka of course bought his lie. "Naruto-kun was wondering if he scared you off. He sometimes forgets his blood lust is really scary to others."

"R-Right." He answered as he began looking around. The blond's blood lust indeed had nearly caused his heart to stop. He was really different from the relaxed guy on the bus.

"He should be back soon. I'm going to enjoy catching up with im. How long have you two been friends? He never mentioned you before."

"W-Well, we just met actually." He answered the question, having calm down. Glancing at Moka, Tsukune couldn't help but notice her ethereal like beauty. He surely would have been smitten, but quickly remembered how close she was to Naruto and didn't want to face the blond's wrath.

"You're Akashiya Moka, correct?" The two turned their heads to see the pierced student Tsukune recognized Naruto almost got into a fight with. The thug walked up he student who had suggested eating humans before in homeroom walked up; a smug smirk adorning his face as his eyes travelled over Moka's body. "'I'm your classmate Saizou Komiya! Salutations! ''Please tell me why a beautiful woman like yourself is hanging out with this loser?" He reached over and grabbed Tsukune's collar before lifting the human off the ground with ease.

"Put him down…now!" The voice from behind Saizo demanded.

"N-Naruto-kun." Moka cried out upon seeing the blond had returned.

Saizo sneered at him. "And what are you going to…" Saizo suddenly found himself doubling over, forced to drop Tsukune who landed on the ground.

Naruto removed his elbow. "I'll do that." He cheekily finished. "Weak dogs like you pick on the weak because they're inadequate. I'll give you one chance to leave and I'll forget this."

"You little shit! I'll kill you for that!" Saizou said standing up with anger clear in his eyes, as he snarled like a wild animal.

''N-Naruto-kun!'' Moka cried out to Naruto in concern and was about to go to his side when the blond held up his hand.

''I'll be okay Moka-san, just let me handle this.'' he said as Saizou charged him only for Naruto to twist and easily avoid Saizou and jammed his elbow into the monster's back causing him to double over. Before the brown-haired thug could recover Naruto jammed his foot into Saizou's back and forced him into the ground.

''What are you punks waiting for!'' Saizou shouted as he struggled against Naruto's foot. Out from around the corner several monsters appeared around the corner. They all either had eye or nose piercings. The first was rather short and slightly beefy with arms that looked to large for his body. The second was the tallest of them with beady little eyes and a shaved head, and the last of them had black eye-lashes, but badly dyed blond hair. They all charged the blond at once only for an invisible force to send them flying into the walls of the school with a bone crushing thud.

''I hate thugs like yourself. Preying on those who can't defend themselves and would force themselves on women.'' he dug his foot harder into Saizou's struggling back. ''Rumor has it you were sent here to be straighten out and that you raped several human women.''

''Bah! So what...humans are traaaaaah.'' Saizou was cut off as Naruto lifted his foot and stomped down on his back.

''The only trash I see is you,'' he coldly remarked. ''How does it feel to be so weak and helpless? Not even able to raise a finger to protect yourself. Hurts...doesn't it? The same terror your victims felt I bet?'' Naruto spat down on him. ''Let this be a lesson to all of you,'' he shouted out, well aware of all the students who were attracted to the commotion not so subtlety watching what was going on. ''If any of you even think of approaching Moka or anyone else I consider a friend with impure intentions I will break you.'' he remarked, the last part he emphasized while looking down on Saizou, removing his food. He began making his way over to Moka and Tsukune when Saizou pushed himself to his knees.

''You bastard...I'll...I'll make you pay!'' His muscles started bulging and he grew taller and taller. He was a hideous being, his skin an ugly pale beige, he had spikes growing out of his shoulders, and his finger became plated and clawed. His eyes had turned a dark green with slits, "I hoped I wouldn't have to do this, but you've left me no choice, this is my real form, a monstrel Orc!" His tongue zipped out of his mouth and towards Naruto's throat with the intent to snap his neck only for the blond to quickly spin and yank out a kunai ramming it up at the tip of the tongue, causing a cut and Saizou to howl in pain. ''Bastard! Die!" the monstrel Orc charged him only for Naruto to disappear. ''What the?'' Saizou looked around only for the sound of chirping birds to fill his ears and then a hand plunged through his back and through his stomach.

''Cry...of One Thousand!'' and with that a powerful electric current erupted and sent several thousand volts of lightning energy coursed through the monster.

''Holy hell Mizura. Did you see that?'' one monster asked another sea-foam green haired monster.

''This Uzumaki is rather interesting.''

Naruto removed his hand and shook off the blood that coated his arm. ''Normally I'm not so messy, but...you don't deserve a quick defeat. Just stay down, you can't win.'' at this point it was all pointless.

''N-Naruto-kun,'' Moka softly stated as she met eyes with the blond. A mixture of emotions was building up inside of her. Some small part of her was frightened at the brutality of what she just witness, another part was filled with curiosity as she couldn't help but wonder how he could keep himself calm when doing such things, and even another part was attracted to the powerful, confident, yet kind-hearted young man who seemed intent on caring about those who were weak, which considering how vampires or most monsters with power treated those beneath them was a mystery that piqued her interest.

''Stop this nonsense at once!'' an older classmen said as he came upon the sight. He was a bespectacled young man who smelled like a dog, had sharp eyes and a vaguely canine look about him.

Some of the students began whispering in fear and words like safety commission and Kuyo were brought up at once. ''Komiya I am not surprised.'' he said before looking around at all the witnesses. It was the first day of a new semester and Inugado didn't feel like dealing with endless reports. ''Who is the one who started this incident?'' numerous students immediately answered and blamed Saizou.

''Komiya Saizou will be brought in to discipline measures. Be warned, those caught engaging in rule breaking will be severely dealt with.'' Inugado said as he turned a stern gaze to Naruto and used his palm to adjust his glasses. Saizou apparently wasn't one to give up easy tried to get up, covering his torso where he was injured only to have his face struck by Inugado's palm with enough force it would dislocate the neck of a normal human's head.

''Naruto-kun, let's go,'' Moka urged the blond away, pulling at his arm to which the blond reluctantly agreed. With Saizou dealt with he didn't see a reason to stay around. Managing to lose the students the three of them came a stop in front of the school's greenhouse.

"You two alright?" Naruto asked now that he was convinced they were alone.

"Yeah I'm fine." Moka answered, finally allowing herself to breath.

"I'm fine. And thanks for that, Naruto." Tsukune said as he turned to look at the blond.

"I don't let people mess with my friends. Sazio won't be doing anything like that again."

"Why?" Tsukune asked, getting inquisitive looks from the other two. "Why are you two being so nice to me? I mean…I couldn't even defend myself. I'm a no one." He slid down against the wall and covered his head. "I'm just worthless."

"Don't say things like that, Tsukune-san." Moka said, surprising the human. "No one is worthless. You should never think or feel that way. It's just, its just maybe your strength is not in fighting, but in other things."

"Y-you really think so?"

The vampire nodded. "Of course I do!"

"Moka-chan's right, not everyone is cut out for fighting. Not like a human can do much against a monster anyway." Naruto remarked with a casual shrug.

Tsukune's face turned pale with fear. "Y-You know?"

"Yeah, don't worry about it though," dismissively waved his hand. Considering you looked like you were about to die in class earlier I kind of figured out what was going on, what happened with Saizo confirmed it when you didn't try to transform to save yourself.

"We won't tell anyone if you decide to stay Tsukune-san, but you're going to have to learn how to defend yourself." Moka noted. She then turned to Naruto. "As for you…" She threw her arms around Naruto. "I never thanked you for earlier."

''You...you felt uncomfortable. All those looks and glances,'' he said as Moka paused for a moment before realizing what Naruto was referring too. ''I had to let them know they're place. They can look but not touch unless you want me to scare them away from looking as well." He playfully added before wrapping his arms around her to return the gesture.

"Like Moka-chan said, if you're willing to stay I might be willing to help you get stronger. It's something you have to decide for yourself."

Tsukune found himself in a conundrum. On one hand this academy was insane, it was filled with monsters, but on the other hand he had finally made friends. Two friends who didn't treat him like he was a nobody.

The hug between them soon came to an end. "You don't have to answer now, but quite frankly I'm interested in seeing more of the school." Naruto suggested.

Realizing he didn't need to make a decision now Tsukune decided to follow his two new friends around the school and see if he might be willing to give this a shot after all.

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I’ve been thinking about and considering how I wanted to do this story for six months now. I’ve almost got everything figured out to a tee, so I hope you guys enjoy this remake of the story. I decided to make everyone Anthro in this revision because it would make writing certain scenes easier. I hope not to lose anyone as I will be putting a greater focus on developing the ties between characters.

This fic is also going to include Loads and Loads of characters. I want to do my best to give backstory and dimensions to every pony so it could be jumping point to other pairings I wish to do.

I also wanted to put a stronger emphasis on how long and well the characters know each other. I hope you guys enjoy this remake as more content and thought was put into it.


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The Bipedal equine continued his walk down the long hallway of the eloquent castle as the soft echoed of his hooved feet echoed along the marbled floor of the castle. He came to a stop in front of two ashen grey furred figures standing guard in front of the lavish double doors. They were both dressed in golden armor that dimly gleamed in the sunlight while being full body so the vital organs weren’t exposed.  

They stood aside allowing the blond entrance to the private study of the Princess. Few people were allowed access to this room.   "Princess Celestia?"  

He had only encountered the princess a few times, their first meeting being the only one with prolonged discussion. He had remembered that day quite well, it was a warm and sunny evening. The windows were cracked so the roof was far from stuffy unlike many of the archive rooms within the castle. He had been trying to gather information on this world in hopes of getting a reference to the special distortion that he had to fallen through.

To his surprise when the Princess had entered the archive she had been observing him for some time.  It wouldn’t be until later that he would learn that she was assessing if he was a threat or not or what his motives were. He had struck up a conversation with her with such causality that it had caught her off guard. After all between her immense magical powers along with the fact she was the one responsible for raising the Sun and Moon she was heralded as a Goddess.

In comparison to all others she was by far rather statuesque in comparison to all other ponies. She was a good few inches above eight feet tall towering over most of her subjects. Her fur was white, pure, the coat having a sort of a faint luminescence glow to it with her mane a soft and shimmery polychromatic pattern of colors including a light turquoise, violet crystal, and with shades of cerulean and cobalt. Her form was voluptuous with ample chest, long legs and all around appealing figure.    She was wearing a white laced dress that loomed down to her ankles with the rest of her outfit consisting of a golden crown with an assortment of royal gems encrusted in it along with golden horse shoe adornments that she wore on her hooves.  

The room was rather modest, large enough to be filled with a few dressers filled with parchments and books. There were several windows with violet and gold trimmed window curtains as sun rays shined into the room. The desk was also of a fine imported wood with the look of a black leather sort of texture. There behind the desk sat Celestia who seemed to be going over a scroll.


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“Naruto!” Princess Celestia said. "Please, come in! It is good to see you again!"

"Hello, Princess," Naruto said. "It's good to see you, too."

Celestia walked towards Naruto. "I asked the guards to clear the Glass Hallway, so we could speak there in private," she said. "I hope you don't mind?"

“Not at all I just feel glad I’ll finally be able to pay you back.” He said as he glanced to the side and took in his appearance in the mirror. It was something he spent a great deal having to adjust to when he woke up as a bipedal equine.  

It took him a great deal of time to get used to this body. He spent far more effort on tuning up his physical body this time around. His arms and legs more defined with muscles as well as his abs thanks to all the physical work he had partaken in. The outfit he was currently wearing though had hid most of that.  He was only able to do so thanks to Celestia providing him some bits so he could start up a livelihood of sorts in the town he was living in.

He was wearing black uniform pants and dark blue shirt that was made of a slightly inferior material than that of the fine material used by the military.  The material came from up north and quite costly, but it was worth it due to the strength of the material and its weather resistance, but seeing as Naruto wasn’t a guy who had experience or knowledge in fashion he couldn’t make out the details of the economics or the quality of it. “Not to mention I’ve always been curious about the story behind those images.”

“Very well…follow me.” Celestia smiled. She led Naruto out of the room and together, they went to the Glass Hallway.

Naruto had only been through the Glass Hallway once and that was when he snuck in. It was an evening in March in which his attempts to meet the Princess was rebuffed by guards and novel a like at the topic of some no name riffraff would have the gall to try and speak with the Princess. He assumed his mannerisms and lack of high society knowledge made It easy to spot out that he didn’t belong.

As she led him down the hallway he saw many images.  A few of them were rather interesting and he couldn’t wait to hear the story behind them. One was of a red skinned Centaur being banished into a pit of sorts. Another was of Celestia and a pink Alicorn. That was an interesting term as it was a pony with both wings and horn which Celestia was both blessed with. In comparison to Pegasus’s the Princesses wing span was large and majestic like a swan not to mention her horn had enough length to it to be comparable to a saber.

He was jarred from his thoughts when she began speaking. “I suppose you’re wondering why I sent you a letter requesting your presence.” Princess Celestia said. "I have need for your knowledge.”

“I’m not sure if I’m the best pony to come to for knowledge.” Naruto said. When he had been caught by the Princess in her study he decided to be honest and hope to appeal to her sense of mercy. Prior to his arrival he had heard much about the Princess’s character and hoped what he had learned about her was true. Revealing that he was not a pony but a human who traveled through dimensions and taking the form of a pony, it was still hard to wrap his head around the ponies of this world and of his old world was considered the same species.    

“Your knowledge in this particular matter is quite unique. Considering your own past I could trust no one else with such an important task.  I need your help in preparation for Nightmare Moon’s return.” The sound of hoof steps came to a stopped as the Princess paused.  Those pale magnets eyes settled on the blond whose eye lids settled slightly and he cradled his elbows.

He was contemplating her windows, his soft exhale and slow and subtle body movements betrayed his uneasiness.  He had come across reference of her during his research into important and powerful historical artifacts. There were very few mentions or suggestions of something called the Elements of Harmony which he only learned of thanks to Kage Bunshin. It was the knowledge feedback that the jutsu gifted him being the major factor of why he had even discovered the information considering he wasn’t the most astute student.   “So she’s more than just a myth huh?”

“Indeed,” she answered with a nod. “Four months from now a thousand years will have passed since I’ve seen her…”

“…on the day of the Summer Sun Festival.”  He finished as he realized on what day the deity’s release fell on.  “What can I do?” he would be of no assistance to her. No matter how much stride he had made in this body he was far from his past level of strength. Maybe if he had his strength from the Fourth War he could assist Celestia, but he was only at the level of strength he achieved before he had fought Nagato.  Adjusting to this current body was more difficult then he had hoped when he started to train himself back up again.

“I am no longer capable of taking on Nightmare Moon. The Elements of Harmony are the only force capable of stopping her and I’m no longer capable of wielding them.” The words she spoke seemed rather measure, but Naruto chalked it up to it being personal history.  

  “So the issue is finding someone who can?” he theorized.

“There are six elements representing Harmony itself Honesty, Kindness, Loyalty, Generosity, Laughter, and Magic.  For the past few years I have taken the pony who I believe is the Element of Magic, Twilight Sparkle as my student.”

Naruto definitely recognized the name as Celestia had mentioned her in the passing. She had expressed her concerns with the mare’s rather antisocial behavior. He had as of yet met Celestia’s student as the two would just miss each other. “What about the others?”

“Unfortunately that has been a matter that remains unsolved.  For the past  two decades I have been searching from town to town of any possible Element candidates, but that has proven unsuccessful not to mention what knowledge I have on the elements ensured that Magic is the spark that ties them together. My attempts to encourage Twilight to make friends have been less than fruitful and time is running out. There is one last town that has been unchecked and I believe its possible the candidates are there and if they are it is my hope that Twilight will form a bond with them. Seeing as you are a citizen of Ponyville I theorized that it may be possible you have your own thoughts on possible candidates. There is also the fact that I wish to have a second opinion and that I am merely not imposing my wishes and hope upon the ponies not to mention your more familiar relationship with them so you would give you a better insight of their genuine qualities.”

“I see,” he simply stated as he went over Celestia’s confession. It made sense, after all if Celestia had spent all this time looking for the other bearers with only Ponyville left for this year’s search. Not to mention he would know these ponies on a more personal level meaning he would know if the mare was simple and truly honest and not just someone who was honest most of the time. “Very well Princess I’m more than happy to help you, but say even if I do have some ponies in mind, what happens next?”

“I already have plans to send my protégé to help organize the preparations for Ponyville.”

He nodded as he went over the traits again. Honesty. Laughter. Generosity. Loyalty. Kindness. Five ponies capable of wielding legendary artifacts and he would only have a few months to figure them out.  “I see, and when do I start?”

“Immediately.” Celestia said. "This is of the utmost importance."

“Princess I assure you that I’ll do everything I can to help you. Ponyville, no Equestria has become my home now. I will protect it no matter what.”

"Excellent," Celestia said. "I knew I could depend on you. Let's make preparations immediately." She said as the beckoned the blond to follow her.


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Mayor Mare was by far among the most normal and stable of ponies. She was wearing a suit with a tie a shade darker than the color of her light grayish amber coat. The mare looked about in her early thirties with a nice fit figure with her light grey mane. Though what few people fail to realize was that their mayor was not as old as her coloration on her mane and tail would suggest, but the fact she hardly looked a day over thirty had them assume she merely looked young for her age.

"The choir will be seated over there," the elder mare said. "Princess Celestia will be behind the onstage curtain until I introduce her."


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"What about food?" Naruto asked. Since Celestia had sent him as a liaison of sorts he would be able to make subtle suggestions of the Mayor on which ponies would be the best for certain positions for the celebration.

"Nopony has volunteered to help with the food yet," Mayor Mare informed him as she went over the checklist of names on the clipboard she was carrying. “There is still a lot to work out with the scheduling of the weather along with the seating and clean-up the organization will have to handle."

“Well Mayor I’ll let you know if I happen to find anyone who can volunteer.” He stated as he mentally began making a list of ponies who might fit the criteria. He was going to have to go down the list one by one.

Cheerilee was without a doubt one of the sweetest ponies that Naruto knew. She was also rather cute and had a kind heart. Her fur coloration was one of the more unique shades in the town of Ponyville with a cerise coat and a very pale rose with her mane a very pale cerise mane. Her outfit consisted of a very modest green and orange pattern ankle length skirt simple short-sleeved white buttoned shirt with knee-length socks and flats. Her outfit highlighted a nice figure with nice hips, but she was someone of a more reserved nature so her look was rather classy.

She was one of the ponies that he felt qualified as an element. Naruto knew Cheerilee enough that she liked spending her Saturdays in the park reading and taking in the fresh air. Because of the tight-knit nature of the town it was easy to develop a tight-knit circle of friends. “So how have you’ve been doing Cheerilee?”

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“Things have been pleasant as always. How was your trip?” Cheerilee asked.

“Interesting,” he began as some ponies traveled by and waved. “I always enjoy traveling when I can.”

The small talk was of simple things really. Like how their day went and speculation of how the Summer Sun Festival was going to entail. It grew late into the afternoon before Naruto bid her goodbye with promises of getting together for Lunch sometime.

Naruto concluded the day with a light meal of celery soup, something that took him a long time to adapt to as he compiled the notes he made.

Cheerilee

A very kind and light-hearted mare that enjoyed teaching children.

Friendly and sociable.

She was a good candidate for the elements of Generosity and Kindness, but her talents lie within teaching. The only volunteer work she could conceivably do for the festival was cleanup.

Naruto decided to move to the next pony on his list Ditzy Doo. Naruto made his way to where Ditzy lived in one of the small houses that bordered near the shopping section of the town.

Ponyville wasn’t a large town with a population capping at nearly 400 ponies. With Dinky in school and Amethyst at the academy there was one place where he would find his wide-eyed buddy.

So he went along one of the dirt trails towards one of Ponyville’s farm. The most important crops that made up a lot of the town’s Agriculture consisted of Apples and Carrots. The carrot farm owned by none other than a mare by the name of Golden Harvest or known by her closest friends as Carrot Top thanks to the color of her mane and that farming carrots was her special talent.

The trail to the Carrot farm was a nice mile and a half hike along one of the trails. He made his way across an intersecting path as Harvest’s property came into sight. He eventually made his way to the porch which was a little worn down with patches of hole in the ground. Behind the tinted windows one could make out a curtain shielding the inside of the home from prying eyes with a bug zapper hanging not too far by one of the wooden planks.

Naruto gave a knock on the door and called out to carrot top. “Coming!” a light, almost feathery voice had called out. Opening the door stood the form of Golden Harvest, a carrot orange mane mare with a slender figure bright emerald-green eyes and pale yellow skin. She was wearing a red top underneath overalls showing off tone legs cultivated from being a farmer. Like most farmers there were light callouses on her hands from all the farm work. Though seeing as Harvest was the only one who owned and managed the farm it was small compared to others that worked in said business. “Hey there Naruto. How can I help you?”



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“Hey there Carrot have you happen to see Ditzy? She wasn’t home so I thought I checked here.”

“No, she’s out at the market to restock my fridge since she cleaned it out again.” She remarked with a look mixed between a deadpan and a grimace.

A light chuckle escaped his lips. Golden invited Naruto into her home as his heavy footsteps creaked against the wooden floor board. They entered the kitchen in wear Golden was brewing some hot water for coffee. As Naruto looked around he noticed Carrot had some new wall paper installed as he continued observing the room. The table was new no longer would anyone using it and deal with the squeaks thanks to the bad leg.

“So why are you looking for Ditzy? Something up?” she wondered as she finished pouring the coffee and went to the counter and began cutting out a slice of cake. “Want some cake?”

“No thanks,” he kindly refused as he began adding cream and sugar. “Anyway the reason I’ve been looking for Ditz is for preparation for the festival coming up, speaking of which Carrot this would be a nice opportunity to get some advertisement for your farm if you volunteer. There’s still a spot for a food vender to set up shop.”

“Aww, I would really like to do so, but I’m going out-of-town. I’m visiting my Grandma for her birthday, but you could always try the apples.” She suggested before she turned her body sideways in the chair to still a glance behind Naruto to check the time on the grandfather clock in the hall. “Now where is that mare?”

“So how did you and Ditzy meet?”

Besides Carrot Top he was the only other person that could be called Ditzy’s friend. One would probably argue Pinkie Pie with her help on making a friend of everyone, but the eternally happy and bouncy mare would be better classified as a casual acquaintance.

“Well it’s a bit of a long story. One day I was mining my business when Ditzy all of a sudden crashed through the roof of my living. Scared the living Tartarus out of me.” A pleasant smile graced her lips. “You know how she is, with that smile of hers, greeting me hello without much consideration on just what happened to her. She was about to leave when I noticed she had badly sprained her wing. I had to stop her and practically forced her on my couch.” Golden continued her tale as she had insisted on delivering Ditzy’s package knowing a road to Huffington through an abandoned path in the Everfree forest. “That was when I met this giant rabbit creature. I was so scared at first, but it turned out he was kind friendly. I had managed to come across his garden after being frightened by the giant serpent.” She had gone on to explain how she had enlisted the creature’s help to finish delivering package. “By the time I finally got back Derpy was lounging on my couch with all my foot on the table and you know what she told me? I emptied out your fridge and the worst part is she somehow always manage to get past the locks I put on it.” She finished with a cute pout.

After their conversation Naruto filed Golden’s name away as the possible element of Generosity. “Carrot!” a low almost coltish voice called out before the sound of crashing echoed. “I’m ok!” Naruto and Carrot went up and helped the mare up. “Hi Naruto!” she happily greeted.

“Hey there Ditzy.” He greeted the mare. Ditzy by far would be considered one of the most attractive mares If you changed a few things about her, but those quirks made her who she was and he wouldn’t change a thing about her. Derpy’s voice suited the mare that was a few inches taller than five feet tall. She had a bluish gray coat along with pale light grayish yellow mane and tail along with a pair of Pegasi wings. While Earth ponies were known for their strong bodies and connection with nature, usually resulting in them being the physically strongest and largest of ponies Pegasi were known for their light bodies and lithe form.

Ditzy’s form was a bit more on the thick side with normal legs, slight pudgy, but wide hips and a nice chest. The general area of her haunches though was her best features large and spacious like a blown up bubble. She was wearing grey sleeveless dress that came down to her thighs with white splotches with a pair of block boy shorts underneath. The one feature of Ditzy that made her stood out was that she was in fact crossed eye which mixed in with her infamous clumsiness and her simple nature earned her a lot of ire and bullying through much of her childhood. As a result she had few friends as most people avoided the mare because of the unfortunate bad luck that tends to occur when Ditzy popped up.

Considering his own lonely childhood Naruto had bonded with Ditzy almost instantly. The muffin-loving mail mare he personally felt qualified as the Element of Kindness, but he needed to do some more research. After helping Ditzy put away the groceries and talking a bit more, to which Ditzy happily volunteered to help clean up after the Summer Festival bid them farewell, promising to come to the party Ditzy was planning for her oldest Amethyst Star when she graduated from Celestia’s School for Gifted Unicorns.

Naruto took a brief glance at the Criteria Celestia had given him. A bond between the bearers was important. Carrot as Generosity and Ditzy as Kindness would fit two out of five of the ponies, but there was the problem of the fact Ditzy had no ties to the others. If the Elements of Harmony were to be a united force then they were going to need a connection.

After bidding goodbye to the two mares he made his way home. Remembering Carrot Top’s statement Naruto decided to go pay a visit to Applejack tomorrow. Naruto made his way to his current place of residence. A large two-story building with lavish trends and with a theme one would instantly mistake as circus theme. The colors of the building consisted of cerulean, golden, diamond and silver shades for a good deal of its outline with pink and other shades of violets using for such things as the curtain and horse mannequins outfits. Columns of intersecting colors of gold and mulberry made up the solid infrastructure of the building.

The crystal like clear glasses and an orange flag on top a red shaped heart was one of the emblems above the golden horse shaped emblem above the home adorn with pink and violet hearts. This building made up Naruto’s place of residence a few weeks after he arrived to Ponyville. A good deal of his money he earned doing odd jobs here and their across Ponyville seeing as his explanation for his mark didn’t translate well into a working career.

“Rarity I’m home.” Naruto called out as he walked further into the building. While the other homes were a bit more on the rustic side Rarity’s home was more fitting of a place one would expect from Canterlot. The rooms had a small collection of, elaborate paintings hang from the walls and the fresh scent of flowers floats buoyantly throughout the rooms, with the windows covered by a pair of dark red curtains, allowing no more than a sliver of the sun’s rays to filter into any room at a simple time.

“Bienvenue à la maison Naruto,” a voice called out in a language known as Phrench. His roommate slash boss slash friend was rather well-known for her classiness and the fact she followed nearly all things trendy. By far she was one of the most attractive women Naruto had ever seen and one of the few to initially got a reaction out of Naruto during his adjustment phase.

Dark nylon stockings tightly gripped against her long, slender legs; a black business skirt up against her shapely hips that swayed this way and that with an almost practiced grace about them; and to top it off, a sleeveless white blouse showing just enough of her ample cleavage. Her fur was soft looking and white as snow with the faint smell of perfumes and other productive radiating off the model like mare who had a hand rested on her well-defined hip. Rarity, out of all the mares he knew, worked on not only being ladylike, but also worked to keep up his figure. More than once the blond had to pry his eyes from her backside.

Rarity’s kept form was more as a result of conditioning than that of the usual body type of a Unicorn without magic alteration that was.

Of the three pony times Unicorns were often the most average and slim of the tribes seeing as their magic had them do the least physical labor of the three tribes. As a result that often left them with the weakest bodies of the three having to rely on their magic to make up the difference.

She greeted the blond with a friendly hug, dark lavender hair framing around her stunningly beautiful face in a stylized Coiffure as it was called.


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“Hello to you too Rarity enjoy having your home to yourself while I was gone?” he lightly teased.

“Well it was definitely quiet.” She replied to his teasing with a wry quip. “Did you enjoy your trip?”

“Yeah indeed, I really didn’t have much time for pleasure. It was more of a business trip than anything.” He answered as Rarity nodded. She then beckons him to the kitchen so she could continue asking him questions. Rarity was without a very kind hostess and great friend. Upon really thinking about it Rarity was a more than ideal candidate for the element of Generosity.

Only problem was she had no connection to Ditzy or Carrot Top. He went over his thoughts again with Ditzy and Cheerilee for Kindness with Rarity and Golden for Generosity. He decided to see if he could find some of the other Elements tomorrow to help narrow down his choices.

That morning Naruto woke up to the smell of breakfast. That was a smell he always welcomed as he got washed up and dressed for the day. He entered the kitchen and there waiting for him was pancakes, eggs, along with a bowl of fruit. Rarity as always had a light meal of fruit and toast with a bowl of oatmeal.

Per usual they would finish their meal before they began to talk. As usual Rarity’s mane was in its usual up do, her outfit lint free and freshly ironed. There was definitely a perfectionist’s mentality to the way she did things. Rarity once again expressed her interest in Naruto’s trip to which he gave her an edited version of the details. “One of the main things that still needs doing is to find some volunteers to help decorate Town Hall and the area around it. The thing is the money for the decorations will be costly.”

“Why I see how that would pose a problem. “ Rarity paused as she began thinking about an idea that could help saw this problem. Suddenly her eyes slightly widen and her face later lit up as a thought came to her mind . “Idea!~” Rarity sang out the word in a cheerful little melody. “I have plenty of old threads and other decorations in my work room. I would be more than happy to not only give them in fact I would be more than happy to volunteer my services for the festival. “

“That’s very kind of you Rarity. Finding someone for decorations was one of the biggest concerns and I’m sure the mayor will be glad to hear you’ll be the one handling it.” As a seamstress, Rarity knew a great deal about designs, colors, and anything within those fields. If there was a pony who you would count on for decoration then it was someone whose field was similar to that.

Naruto was now more than sure that Rarity was the Element of Generosity. Since today seemed to be a slow day, Rarity didn’t have many tasks for Naruto so he carried on and made his way to Sweet Apple Acres.

The Apple farm was by far larger than Carrot Top’s farm. The Apples not only harvested and sold apples but also took care of livestock. The workers consisted of Applejack and Big Macintosh with Granny Apple as the elder that oversaw the business side of things. Also cute little Apple Bloom also lived on the farm, occasionally helping out on the farm. Many of the Apple Clan were located throughout Equestria with their relatives going into the hundreds.

The Apples were among his closest friends; in fact he owed his life to Applejack and Mac. Naruto took a glance at the porch where the apple green Granny Smith Apple would often spend her time rocking peacefully in her chair. That infamous squeak with each forward tilt that accompanied the rocking motions was one that would enter the mind and never leave. He continued searching around for hide or hair of the other apples. He knew around this time Apple Bloom would be in school which meant AJ and Mac were working the farm.

Finally he came across the form of Big Mac carrying a large bale of Hay with one arm. In terms of raw physical strength there wasn’t a pony in Ponyville that could beat Big Mac; he was second to none in terms of endurance either. He was tall enough to loom over most ponies, he was easily seven feet tall. His complexion was that of a deep brilliant Amaranth. Naruto would soon come to learn that knowing shades of color was a very important part of equine culture because they, along with features or talents, played the role that names would have in identifying your ancestral heritage.

Anyway he hands down was one of the hardest working ponies in Ponyville. His red flannel shirt seared at the ends and stained with sweat. It clung to his torso accentuating his broad and muscular chest and pectorals. Despite lacking any formal training Big Mac’s body was well-defined from all the farm work leading to him developing a muscular and attractive body. It was further highlighted by the holes in his jeans that showed off hints of his muscular legs. His brilliant orange mane and sap green eyes completed his farm boy look.

His rather quiet and reserved nature along with his respectful demeanor earned him more admirers than the average stallion. It would be unfounded to say at least a third of the mares, if not more of the mares, of Ponyville either fancied or were attracted to Big Mac, but seeing as Ponyville was one of the most heavily mare populated settlements in the Pony community that made the choices rather selective seeing as the Mare population heavily outnumbered the Stallion population five to one. As such it wasn’t an uncommon practice for those in certain communities to have members that formed herds.

“Hey there Mac!” Naruto greeted the worker as he adjusted his stride to match his own.

“Howdy.” He grunted out without breaking his stride to continue collecting the hay.

“I was wondering if the Apples have any plan for the Summer Sun Festival coming up because food preparations needs figuring out since there haven’t been any volunteers.”

“Ah wouldn’t be able to help ya, preparing for the reunion, but ah reckon Applejack would be able to aid you.” He said as he placed the hay block into the pike with the rest of them before grabbing the wagon stationed by the entrance and began dragging it outside.

“Is Applejack on the farm anywhere?” he wondered as he watched Big Mac placed buckets in the wagon that was often used to carry apples bucked from the trees.

“She’s in town sellin’.” He answered as he finished stacking all the buckets in the cart.

“Thanks Mac.” Called out with a wave as he began his journey anew back into town to find the other farm pony.

The blond made his way to Ponyville’s market center the one place where one could find it all when it came to the ingredients for your meal and where haggling skills meant the difference between a nice meal or a nice little feast with spending money for tomorrow.

“Are you serious? Only three bits?” a shocked voice asked as Naruto continued to weave around the crowd of ponies.

“Yes indeed,” a voice spoke with a strong and familiar Southern drawl.

“Wow, back in my old town Apples were fifteen bits an Apple. “

Naruto finally came upon the scene to see a cobalt blue gentleman in his late thirties with short and neatly groom jet black mane was purchasing from Applejack. He was wearing a dress pants and suit combo with small square rim glasses with his eye color a dull sort of gold. The voice he had been definitely younger than his voice indicated. The Earth Pony stallion picked up the barrel of Apples and went on his way.

“Yo AJ,” Naruto called out to the Earth Pony. The mare in question was behind a stall selling apples. She was slightly taller than him not to mention she was physically developed like her brother from all the farm work, but more in a feminine shape. She had pale light olive coloring for her mane with the same sap green eyes that all the Apples on Sweet Apple Acres had along with a light dusting of freckles on her face. Her coating was that of a light brilliant gamboge colored marred from the sweating and hard work, not to mention there were scratches and cut on her face and body from either farming accidents or creatures that would occasionally wander in from the Everfree Forest.

All and all Applejack was a country girl seeing as her outfit consisted of a red and white checkered tie-up shirt with a chest that easily rivaled Rarity’s generous bosom. The Daisy Dukes she was wearing showed off her legs thick with muscle, a defining trait of an Earth Pony. Earth ponies famed for strength and endurance were often the largest of the three pony tribes. It was also thanks to this conditioning that gave her a firm and noticeably round bottom and svelte waist that had initially gained the apple farmer a lot of admirers, but a few factors led to that thinning over time.

Applejack would only be courted by a strong and honest stallion with a worthy work ethic and considering the Apples seemed to have unusual strength even by Earth Pony standards and stubborn adherence to their ethics that meant many Stallions fell short of her standards. Despite this the Apple still had plenty of admirers who still tried to cut corners in their attempt to woo her.

In a way it actually reminded him of Rarity’s own fan base of admirers enamored by her beauty, but unfortunately for them Rarity’s standards were even higher by far. By the time he had gotten over there the mare had readjusted the Stetson hat on her head. “Well ain’t ya a sight for sore eyes. How’s your boss lady treating ya? Surprised she let ya out of the shop.”

“Come now Applejack if you get to know Rarity you’ll see she’s a perfectly nice mare.” He knew that Applejack’s experience with the high life during that time she spent with her Uncle and Aunt Orange colored her perception of the high-class. “So that last customer seemed pretty happy.” He said pointing his thumb in the same direction AJ’s previous customer went.

“Well that fellar was telling me how they were gouging the prices in the last town he and his wife lived in. I know of the regions and Apples ain’t that rare ya know. He was trying to buy mah apples for way over price and ah couldn’t, in good conscious, do that to the poor fellar.” She finished with a slight sigh. To be honest money was always a touch and go subject at Sweet Apple Acres. Especially considering that Granny Apple was getting on up there in years meaning that medically emergencies were another thing to be factored into their budget and with the growing repairs to the farm thanks to some of the creatures in the Everfree venturing near town now more than ever.

Naruto’s face softened at this. “That was incredibly kind of you Applejack.”

“Why thank yah sugarcube.” Applejack replies to your comment, before she frowns a little. “But ah’m afraid that ah may have to start bumping up the prices if the sales don’t pick up.”

Naruto then remembered why he was looking for her. “Actually Applejack that reminds me of something. I was wondering if you would be willing to cater for the Summer Sun Festival? Initially there was only going to be enough of the budget to order the decorations, but since Rarity offered to decorate town hall for free I could probably convince the mayor to use enough of the budget to cover the food bill. This could also be some nice advertisement to Sweet Apple Acres for the ponies who are going to come for the festival.”

“Sounds like a mighty fine idea ta me. Heck Mac is handling the planning’ for the reunion so why not. Ah’m sure there should be plenty of the family who’d be more than happy to help out. Count me in.”

“This is turning out easier than I would expect. The mayor will be pleased. “ he said as he placed down a bit to buy some apples.

“Why thank yah kindly partner.” Applejack smiles as she scoops up at his bits in a matter of seconds she handed him the apples.

“I’m afraid I have to leave now to find any more volunteers for the festival. I’ll be seeing you AJ.”

The cowpony nods. “Yep, you too Naruto,”

Naruto continued his way through the busy market streets. Next thing he knew a pink blur appeared out of nowhere and slams into him hard making his back kiss the pavement. It took him a moment to recollect himself when he felt a very soft, warm and heavy body press itself against his, as two very immense and cushion pillows lay against his chest. What’s more his nose could smell the odd aroma of cotton candy and cake frosting. “Hi Pinkie Pie.” He greeted without missing a beat.

“Gotcha!” she replied with a giggle. “You’re slipping up mister. You didn’t even sense me this time.”

He was so caught up in his mission he had completely forgotten about the little game between him and Pinkie. “Alright, alright you got me can you let me up now?”

Those violet orbs of hers were so full of mirth and innocence it was hard to stay mad at her. Of the other mares Naruto had gotten to know so far, Pinkie was on the shorter side with her skin a brilliant rose shade and her mane and tail a raspberry shade. Unlike the other ponies Pinkie’s mane and tail was that of an unconventional puffy style reminiscent of cotton candy. Like the others Pinkie also had a desirable shape but more unique to her energetic nature. She was shorter and far less muscled like Earth Ponies to the point many a pony or two wondered if she was lazy, but those who knew Pinkie knew there was nearly no shortage to her energy. Also with a figure like that lazy was not the word one would use. She had a nice chest for one, perky and a bit larger than average meaning so not in the leagues of Rarity or even Applejack though one wouldn’t know it from all the hyperactive bouncy the mare did.

One would think with all her snacking habit of candy and cake that Pinkie would be pudgy, but that was anything but the case. Her stomach was nice and thin, though her waist was curve if not noticeably larger than most voluptuous shape because Pinkie didn’t exercise fanatically or worked out like most would but that didn’t stop her from having a more hourglass shape from the waist down. No, all that sugar did in fact went somewhere and it was that plump ass of hers. If Pinkie hadn’t been known as something of a loon about town she would probably have just as many admirers if not more so than a lot of the other mayors. Unfortunately her highly energetic and sometimes over friendly demeanor made her off-putting to a lot of ponies. Her outfit consisted of a white T-shirt with the words “Party Girl” bold in gold stopping short of her midriff along with a pair of form-fitting Blue Jeans. A stark contrast to her usual yellow skirt or shorts she would have usually worn on her days off.

Naruto, unaware that he was starting quite attentively at Pinkie, wondered why he didn’t think about asking for her health.

“Looks like someone likes what he sees!” Pinkie smirked mischievously, very much amused by the embarrassment forming on Naruto’s face.

“Pinkie,” Naruto mumbled with an embarrassed blush. He still hadn’t quite fully worked out his own thoughts and feelings about this situation. He would be blind not to notice how attractive the mares are, they were bipedal and it was those similar features that helped Naruto better adapt to this society, but he was still adapting and getting used to being a pony so when it came to romance it was one of the things he had on the back burner.

“So! Did you enjoy checking me out?” she teased earning an annoyed sigh from the blond. With someone who didn’t have much dating experience she sure was an expert at teasing him. She and Rainbow Dash had that much in common at least.

“Yes actually, feels like someone might need to go bra shopping soon.” He shot back in hopes of embarrassing her but instead she reacted in typical Pinkie Pie faction.

“You really think so?” she asked, groping her chest and began fondling them with up and down motions.

Naruto’s blush intensified. Only Pinkie Pie could turn his pranks and verbal jabs back on him. Then again it was one of the things he liked best about her. She was a completely honest and sweet mare that saw the best in everything.

She was the Element of Laughter bar none. He didn’t even really have to think about who’d he pick for that one if he was honest.

“Hey Pinkie who do you think is the most loyal pony in town?” he wondered as he began to notice a trend in his choices.

Pinkie pulled out what she called her thinking cap, which was essentially a mini graduates hat and began thinking. “Well there’s the Apples who are very loyal to their family, oh and Cheerilee she’s so nice always doing her best to educate the little colts and fillies, and there’s Mayor Mare whose always doing her best for the town, and the Cakes they’re super nice and awesome and always dedicated to each other, and Shoeshine always take time to listen to those she cares about, and Note Worthy is…”

“Pinkie calm down.” He forcibly placed his hand over the mare’s mouth. “Pinks!” he called out as she insisted on talking through his hand. She titled her head quizzically and finally stopped talking. “Who do you think among everyone that, no matter what, values being loyal to all else? Can you remember anyone making a major decision to standby someone else?” after he asked that Pinkie immediately began talking to which he had to remove his hand.

“…here so she could stay here with Fluttershy because Fluttershy is so sweet, but really sensitive and…”

“Wait…start again. Who are we talking about?” he asked.

She looked at him as if he just told her a bad joke. “What do you mean? Rainbow Dash silly, don’t you remember?”

Naruto literally face palmed at the fact he didn’t realize this himself. Of course…without Pinkie’s help it would have probably taken him weeks to realize this seeing as Loyalty was one of the hardest traits to figure out or test. Unlike Generosity, Kindness, or Honesty you couldn’t easily test or see that being exhibited as an everyday trait. Loyalty itself was something one could only show during a major event or decision for it to truly be any test of that characteristic.

Rainbow Dash was one of the first ponies he had met. Who he owed his life too and as time went on he got to know a great deal about her. She was close to the Pegasus known as Fluttershy who was truer to her name than most. In fact Rainbow Dash moving to Ponyville was a result of being close to Fluttershy, one of the only two friends Rainbow Dash had made at the academy with her being Fluttershy’s only friend. Considering Rainbow Dash’s own dream one would think she would have a better chance at achieving it by staying in Cloudsdale's but her concern for the other Pegasus saw her moved to this very town.

“Thanks Pie!” Naruto scooped the mare into an energetic hug causing her to let out a little yelp in joy. He was almost sure now.

Generosity = Rarity

Loyalty = Rainbow Dash

Laughter = Pinkie Pie

Honesty = Applejack

Kindness = ?

In fact even if the mares minimally knew each other it was better than his alternative choices. Seeing as Rainbow Dash spent most days either working or snoozing she didn’t socialize unless it was to buy groceries or find out what was going on in town. Pinkie Pie knew all of them because of her nature and once in a while Applejack surely had sold her apples to the other mares. At best they would be casual acquaintances with Ditzy when she delivered their mail and only Applejack and Rarity would have had any contact with Cheerilee due to their younger siblings being in her class.

If one would really think about it who else in Ponyville would really fit the trait of Kindness other than Fluttershy. She was extremely soft-spoken and loving with her talent of taking care of animals. He couldn’t think of a kinder talent than working in the medical field.

He decided he was going to pay Fluttershy a visit tomorrow and see if she was willing to volunteer for the festival. He didn’t even need to ask Pinkie Pie as the moment she saw Twilight in the town she was going to insist on throwing her a party. Everything was coming along he would just need to send the Princess a letter on his thoughts on who the five elements were.

Equestrian Heroes! Chapter 2! Finding the Elements
Naruto takes the chance to live a second more peaceful life. Ending up in a world of  magic he must now must learn  the customs and make the best of things in this strange new world.  During this he befriends  Twilight and the other Elements of Harmony along with the many other ponies in Equestria. A story where laughter is shared, tears are shed, and the bonds of friendship and love are tested in this reimagining.  Despite the gore tag it won't be needlessly gruesome or torture of our favorite ponies.

In this second chapter Naruto goes on a look out for the other Five bearers.

Chapter 1

Equestrian Heroes! Ch 1! The Princess's Request!Equestrian Heroes
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Author's Note
I’ve been thinking about and considering how I wanted to do this story for six months now. I’ve almost got everything figured out to a tee, so I hope you guys enjoy this remake of the story. I decided to make everyone Anthro in this revision because it would make writing certain scenes easier. I hope not to lose anyone as I will be putting a greater focus on developing the ties between characters.
This fic is also going to include Loads and Loads of characters. I want to do my best to give backstory and dimensions to every pony so it could be jumping point to other pairings I wish to do.
I also wanted to put a stronger emphasis on how long and well the characters know each other. I hope you guys enjoy this remake as more content and thought was put into it.
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I want to apologize for my earlier behavior a few days ago.That day was a long one when that happened, but that doesn't excuse how I acted. Your one of my favorite authors, and I should have been more mature in my reaction.

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