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The two of them made sure to go over with Rarity that this detailed interview was to not only answer questions Celestia would have about the bearers, but to make sure she had a detailed file on them for a matter of reasons. One would be as a quick reference in case of a domestic issue that might result from anything ranging from kidnapping to black mail. Knowing their past and combing through it to make sure there is nothing that could be used against them.  The other was that Celestia insisted on rewarding them. Her Generosity which was one of Celestia’s most known traits besides her Kindness was known by many which in hindsight upon the return of the Elements of Harmony made since.

Celestia wasn’t kind and generous because she was secretly some evil dictator controlling everything or because she was being manipulative, those were just genuine traits to her character. The accusations all and all didn’t make sense because if Celestia was truly cruel she wouldn’t be able to use the Elements of Harmony in the first place.

“Well we know of your name Rarity so we will go on to the next question. Do you have any nicknames or aliases you go by? Say for purposes like business deals or such?” Twilight began as Naruto glanced down at his paper and let out a soft sigh.

“Well from time to time I have been given the moniker Rare by those close to me. I have also used the name Radiance during my short stint as a model.  Of course I had to stop modeling because not only did it take away my focus from my career I was not willing to mutilate my body for the styles they had coming out. I am rather happy with my shape thank you very much.”

Naruto heard this story from Rarity once when they were simply talking during one of their gemstone hunts. Apparently Rarity’s hips were too big for some of the dressed and they wanted someone with a more upside down triangle shape.

“Alright now on to the next question. How old are you?” As soon as the question left Twilight’s lips Rarity had paused, looking rather affronted at the question. For a mare like Twilight she didn’t care for such things about guarding her age. She thought the whole idea was kind of silly.

Naruto covered his mouth with his palm to hide the silent laughter. He could practically imagine her speaking. ‘My age? My word, that certainly is not an appropriate question that a lady should be asked.’

“Twenty-three,” Rarity answered in practically a hushed whisper.

“Rare you have decades before even having to worry about entering your Aged years.” He replied as Rarity shot him a look.

“Talking about another pony’s age is anything but polite.” She replied to him in an affronted tone  as Naruto shook his head in response.

All the while Twilight nodded and continued to simply jot down whatever information she was given. For tribe she simply jot down information because that was ease to gleam along with fur, eye, and mane color. With her careful observation she quickly answered the questions that were unnecessary to ask.

“So Rarity how tall are you?”

Rarity happily answered this one if only to get away from the age question. “Five-foot nine,” she answered proudly.

“Okay so how much do you weigh?” As soon as the question left Twilight’s lips Rarity’s tea cup slipped from her grip and clattered on the saucer, spilling some of the tea on it.

“Does such a question really need to be asked?”  This time Rarity couldn’t hide her displeasure.  

“It’s on the list of question Princess Celestia sent me to ask.  If you’re not aware of it offhand you can always go find out and we can answer it later.”

“No, I will answer the question now might as well get it out of the way.” She shot a hesitant glance at Naruto.

As if he read her mind Naruto picked up why Rarity was hesitant. “I’ll be right back.”  He said as he got up and made his way to where the restroom was.  He waited a few minutes and returned just as Rarity finished going over her occupation.  

“Now do you have any scars, illnesses, or allergies?”

Rarity took a moment to think, taking a sip of her tea as she did.  “My body is free of any scars and I am not inflicted with any illnesses thank goodness. As for allergies I have seasonal reactions to certain plants with pollen, but other than that no allergies that I know of.”

All these questions were more than just a biography. Those questions could be used as a checklist to spot out imposters.  “What about accessories and jewelries?”

Now this was a question Rarity could answer. She prattled on for practically fifteen minutes as she trailed off topic as she went into a discussion about necklaces and earrings for various purposes and such.  It took Naruto interrupting her in order to get them back on track.

They skipped the relative questions because Naruto knew of Rarity’s family fairly well. After going over Rarity’s ability it came to the moment Naruto dreaded. Now it was time for him to question her.

“Please keep in mind these are not my questions and were sent to me. I’m only asking this at her majesty’s behest. What is your bust size?” he asked as Rarity’s mouth dropped and Twilight head jumped up from the pad she was jotting information down in surprise.

“E-Excuse me? “ She cried out in righteous indignation. “I do believe I misheard you.”

“A-Are you sure you’re reading that right?” Twilight turned to Naruto, stunned,  stammering as she spoke; after all she was in utter disbelief that Princess Celestia would ask that sort of question.

“Yes Twilight, I can read,”   he sarcastically snapped at her causing her to reel back and her ears to droop. Naruto inwardly cursed himself that he scathily remarked at his friend.

“I’m sorry, I didn’t mean to get mad at you Twilight, its just, well I don’t know.  I mean Princess Celestia has her reasons right?” he reasoned to them while inwardly thinking ‘damn trolling princess’.  He quickly came up with a reason. “Maybe she wants to have a thank you outfit made and she’s making sure she’s getting the measurements right?” It was such bullshit reasoning. He knew it and he suspected Twilight wasn’t sold on it either.

Rarity on the other hand did a one-eighty, no longer sending a hated gaze at Naruto and stared off into space as the look of day dreaming entered her eyes. It was obvious she was imagining a lavish spectacle of an outfit given to her by Celestia herself. “So…about the question.”

“Oh, well, I’m a triple D, size 42.” She answered as her cheeks went flush.  

“Actually I didn’t finish the question. I need more than your bust size, I need your entire measurements.” He said as Rarity hesitated but finished the question. She gave her waist as twenty-six and her hips as Forty-two.  For a moment Naruto had to remind himself that the beings here weren’t human so what was considered reasonable by those standards weren’t going to be the same here.

Naruto blushed a bit, for the first time in a long time he was thinking about Rarity’s figures and looks overall and sure enough she was highly attracted. Sure one or twice he had noticed it, but he never really looked at her in that sort of a way, considering her a dear friend.   “L-Let’s just go ahead and go on to your combat abilities.” Naruto quickly changed up the subject.

Finally it was going on near eleven when they finally finished. ”Is there anything else you wish to know?”

Twilight finished writing down what she needed to before smiling. “Well, then. That’s all. Thank you for the time.  Naruto and I have to plan for the next interview.   I assume this time next month will be good for an update interview?”

“I will have to see what my schedule will hold for that week. I must admit this was a rather interesting interview and I will be seeing the two of you later. “

“See you later Rarity.”

“Later Rare.”

With their good byes exchanged now it was time for the next bearer to show up for their interview.

Equestrian Heroes! Ch 17! Rarity Interview!
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Luna found having to adjust to modern-day bedding was one of those small annoyances that she would have to get used to in this new era. What happened to a nice fluffy cloud bed that shifted with every subtle movement made by its owner?

The sound of light knocking caused the Moon Princess to stop her attempts at trying to sleep.  "Come in," she called out to it.

The door opened quietly, and Celestia stepped through. She had already raised the sun Luna had felt the surge of her sister's magic but the white princess was still dressed in a lilac nightie which would be considered scandalous of someone of her station. She was also without her golden crown and jewelry.

“Morning Luna, I hope my arrival was not at a bad time?”   she asked in a soft, benevolent voice.

“Neigh sister, we are far from tired merely trying to get a few hours of rest before tonight.”

There were few moments during the day the sisters could find time to talk between Luna resting and Celestia with the ever-growing missives that have poured in.  Those times were the morning and evenings when day went to-night and vice versa.  

“So, how did you enjoy your evening last night?” Celestia asked as she took a seat on Luna’s bed.

“Yes.  Naruto Uzumaki has proven himself most enjoyable company. Sister, he is not among your guard correct? How did thou come to know him?”

Celestia  couldn’t help herself and giggled.  “I have to say Naruto is a rather interesting character.” Celestia then began informing Luna about how she had come across the blond in her private library.  How he had snuck in and how they formed an odd friendship of sorts. “I am glad to hear that the two of you get along so well.  Progress between you and our subjects seemed nonexistent and I grew concerned, especially since my duty has kept me far more busy than I would like.”

Luna reached in and wrapped her arms around Celestia, pulling them together.

“Sister, we promise that leaving thou again is the last think we shall do.” Luna released Celestia, and then began speaking again. “Tis a shame we do not have more time like this to converse.”

“Tell me about it, the paperwork has been the worst of it.” Celestia admitted.

“Paperwork sister?”

“Our tax revenue has been pretty consistent, but now a good deal of that has been taken up by repairs and internal improvement bills not to mention there have been pushes for more healthcare plans and expanding our military budget in light of the incident.” Celestia chose her words carefully to avoid putting any extra guilt on her sister.

"But what about trade?  Surely  the bits we get from that would ease the burden of relying on tax revenue for damages.”

“Unfortunately the incident has caused a lot of problems domestic and foreign.  Every nation has focused on the internal strife and damages that the nationwide breakout of criminals has caused. While there are members of every branch of our government working on keeping the export and imports going there have been an increase of bandits attacking and pillaging trade shipments and hiring the necessary protection for certain goods in itself is proving quite expensive.  The money we have Is being funneled into our imports and relief efforts with what’s left over going into maintenance of the city. “

“And our private accounts?”

“Eight-hundred years ago I recreated Equestria’s current banking system as well as financed many of the banks along our borders. I then placed a vast amount of my bits into treasury to finance our nation after a rather costly war with the Griffin Empire a few centuries ago.   I would later go on to construct a document detailing an agreement of a siphon that sees me paid out fifty million bits a year under the condition I would not remove money from the treasury for personal use.  I had to do something to relieve the fear of our subjects at that time not to mention I can honestly say I have no idea what to do with all that money anyway.  While I do not wholeheartedly agree with every decision the governing bodies I created make I do trust the Department of Treasury to make the right calls on handling the financial spending and managing that needs to be taken care of. Right now the biggest headache is all the bills and laws being brought to my attention about how to deal with the tainted criminals and those who were as some of our esteemed members suggested were coerced.”   There was a disagreement of sorts that was brewing through many political circles in the major cities. It appeared several of Nightmare Moon’s forces had come from some rather prestigious families who were accusing Luna of having brain washed their family members and making them slaves for her treasonous actions. This was yet another burden, neigh distraction among the piling amount of situations that Celestia found herself having to deal with.  Frivolous laws or allowances backed by old money to allow the elites as they saw themselves a way to save face.  

The next few months were going to be rather tiring.  With an unimpressed half-lidded gaze Luna dryly commented.   “We see the nobles remain a headache in thee’s skull.”  She then decided to bring up the idea to at least reduce one thing off her sister’s plate. “Speaking of deciding things Tia, we believe we have solved the issue of Captain of our Guard.”


Another tiring day in the town of Ponyville had passed for Naruto.   As he drew closer to his home he picked up the sound of something.

Crying.

He followed the sound of the crying until he came across a distraught mare setting on the bench.   The mare in question was definitely a Unicorn with an ivory coat. She was also rather tall and with a healthy and attractive body. She was wearing a white long lace trim tank top emphasizing her rather large bust along with curve skinny jeans.  She definitely had to be new to town as her light pink mane was even lighter in color than Fluttershy’s mane.

“Are you alright miss? You’re not hurt are you?” he asked as he approached the sobbing mare.

Upon hearing him, the mare looked up at him, stifling her sobs as she wore the tears from her eyes. “O-Oh hello I hope I didn’t disturb you. I’m not having the best of days.”

“If you need someone to talk to then I’d be happy to help.” He volunteered as he took a seat on the bench. Not like he could just leave her here and ignore her.

“I don’t want to bother you. I’m sure you have better things to do than just comfort some stranger.” She replied and sniffled as more tears threaten to fall.

“I’m not the kind of individual who just stand by and ignore others pain. Let’s just say I understand how much it means to have someone to lean on when you’re feeling down.”

“I see.” The mare responded as she took a sigh before explaining her situation. “I decided to come to Ponyville to surprise my coltfriend and caught him in bed with another mare. The thing is we were having issues with our relationship seeing as it was long distance and he wanted to start a herd, but I wasn’t sold on the idea seeing as I wouldn’t even be around to do my duty most of the time.  I know we were having issues with him pushing me into things I weren’t ready but I didn’t think he’d go that far you know.”  

‘Herd?’ Naruto pondered for a second. If he was remembering correctly that was the term of the Menage a Trois? Was that what the term was called? “What about friends and family members?”

“My family is all the way in Canterlot  and I’m new to town. I also won’t be able to withdraw any bits from the bank with it being closed so I won’t be able to afford a hotel.” She said as she shivered and rubbed her arms. Tonight while nowhere near as cold as your usual winter seasons it still seemed rather chilly.

“If you wish you can come back to my place. Its not much, but its better than staying out here in the cold.”

“Really?” she asked, wiping away the last of her tears as she settled her hands in her laps. “I wouldn’t want to impose.”

“Its fine, as a good friend of mine always says, I’m too much of a gentlestallion to leave a lady in need.”

Quickly composing herself, she stood up and turned back to the blond. “Thank you so much. I don’t know how I could ever repay you.”

“Its fine, I’m Naruto by the way. So what’s your name miss? My name is Naruto.” he introduced himself as the mare gave him a warm smile and introduced herself in return.

“Twinkleshine…you have my thanks Naruto.” Twinkle didn't comment on the unusual nature of his name because she felt it would have been rude to do so against the only pony who was willing to help her.

Naruto smiled in return and began leading her back to his place. He unlocked the door and invited her in. “Come in and make yourself at home. Can I offer you anything? Tea or Coffee maybe?” he asked as he led her into the living room. Twinkleshine took a seat on the couch as she gazed around.

“Some coffee with a lump of sugar if you don’t mind.” She answered him as she continued to look around the room. She took notice of some of the scrolls and a bottle of inks on the table.

“Alright a cup of coffee for the mare coming right up. “ Naruto traveled into the kitchen and opened the cupboard. Taking down two cups he set them down on the cabinet and filled his tea kettle with some water. Turning the fire up he began to boil the water. Soon as the water was ready he poured it in the cup along with some instant coffee mix and put in the sugar. He soon returned to the living room and saw that Twinkleshine was standing by the table, looking over his scrolls with interest.

Setting down the saucers containing the cups on the table he walked over. “Have an interest in scrolls?”

The mare jumped lightly and let out a slight yelp. “I-I’m sorry. I didn’t mean to be nosy.”

“No its fine and the coffee is ready by the way.”

The two of them returned to the couch where Twinkleshine carefully lifted the cup with her hooves and took a small sip.  "I don’t believe I’ve had this brand of coffee before.”

“Its local made.  I rarely drink coffee myself but I keep some for days where I feel like I want to sleep in, but really can’t.”

“I hope you don’t find me prying, but what do you do?”

“I don’t have a set career, I’m actually the assistant to the local boutique owner, but I do a lot of odd jobs around town. Helping the local farmers on their land or gathering herbs from the forest.  I saved up enough money for this house, but now I’m trying to decide on what career I should take.  So tell me Twinkleshine did you have a career?”

“Yes, I'm a laywer. I actually finally got a vacation and used that time to come to town. If you don't mind I wish to avoid talking about my job.  Feels like I just can't spend enough time away from it at times."  

“Well we can always talk about something else than. Why not tell me a bit more about yourself?”

Hours ticked away as Naruto continued to chat with the mare.  The two of them traded back stories back and forth as they discussed various topics and such. Even laughter found its way through the home as Naruto regaled in some of his childhood pranks.  It took Naruto taking notice of his clock on the wall for the blond to realize they had spent almost all night talking.  “The sun will be rising in a few hours and I have to get some rest. I’m sorry if I come off as rude, but I have to get up early tomorrow and aid a friend of mine with a project her teacher gave her.”

“Thank you for your company Naruto.” The pleasant smile left her face as she paused as if she was afraid of how the blond was going to react upon the next thing she was going to say. The fact her eyes would meet his and then dart away and she would fidget along with the grasping of her hands gave away her nervousness.  I know I don’t have any right to ask you of this.” She started and inwardly chastised herself.

That sounded absolutely horrible. “I…I mean…” she began to stammer  when the blond gave her a warm smile.

“You can stay as long as you need to.” He answered, seemingly picking up on her problem.

“Its only for a few days, at least until  my paycheck is deposited into my account. I’ll be able to afford a train ticket then and get back home.”

“Of course, until then make yourself at home.” He said as he got up from his seat. “I’m going to get some blankets and pillows and show you to the bedroom. I’m way too tired to argue with anypony tonight so please just take my room. I just wanted to crash as soon as possible and sleep.” Between each of his sentences Naruto let out a deep yawn as his eyes began to cloud with moisture. Twinkleshine would have responded that she couldn’t do such a thing, but seeing that the blond was about to collapse accepted his kind offer without much argument if only to ease the burden of the kind stallion. Saying their good nights the two parted ways as they went to prepare for bed.

Naruto woke up early the next day and made breakfast. After consuming some pancakes and eggs Naruto left a note for Twinkleshine to find while he went on about his business.  Golden Oaks library was a place Naruto visited often when he first moved into Ponyville.  Hours upon hours of time were spent reading and rereading using a combination of kagebunshin and henge to quickly absorb all the information he could get.  

He walked into the library to which Twilight who was sitting behind the desk greeted him.  “Good morning Naruto.” She greeted him with a bright and cheery smile. A few days had passed since the house-warming party that was had for Twilight and Spike.

“Morning Twilight,” he greeted her. “So you ready for this assignment?”  From the time he had spent with Twilight so far she was definitely the dutiful student. She really enjoyed reading and research, a trait that from time to time had him reminiscence about his old team-mate.

“I definitely am, I’m so excited. I’ve already talked with the others and set up a strict schedule for us to begin the interviews.” Naruto raised an eyebrow. Interviews?  “Princess Celestia wanted me to give you this letter.” She said as she brought out that she had neatly tucked away in her bag and levitated it over the blond.

Naruto’s eyes skimmed over the letter and the more he read the more incredulous he got. “What?” he audibly exclaimed, not believing what he was reading. Did Celestia really expect him to ask his friends these questions?. “Uum Twilight, what did Princess Celestia detailed that we should ask the other bearers?”

“She wanted their name, physical traits, and background. She insisted on getting a complete biography so she could reward them for their services to Equestria along with getting to know them better. “

Twilight may have accepted the explanation at face value but as Naruto’s eyes skimmed over some of these questions there was no way in hell that the questions on this size had anything to do with that.

Naruto now came to realize the folly of pranking an immortal princess with several thousand years of living experience. Why did he underestimate how cunning she would be? She even cashed in that little chip they agreed on meaning that he had to take part or admit defeat. Well if Celestia wanted to battle then a battle she shall have.

Since he arrived fifteen minutes early he and Twilight chatted for a bit until Rarity was schedule to arrive. A knock on the door drew them out of their revere. Before Twilight could even get up Spike had raced and beat her to the door with eager bluster.

Opening the door stood none there than Rarity. As always she dressed to impress with one of her usual numbers, but violet in color. Today she was wearing earrings and a diamond necklace along a pair of heels. “Why hello Spike? How are you this morning?”

“Wonderful …” he said in a bit of a daze. “You look wonderful by the way.”

“Aaw,” she cooed as she rubbed the top of his head affectionately. “You are just so sweet. I bet you say that to all the fillies.” With that she walked forward as Spike continued to be in a love struck daze.

“Morning Twilight. Naruto.”

Naruto nodded and smile. “Rare.”

“Morning Rarity, I’m glad you could make it. Can I offer you anything? Muffins? Tea?” Twilight asked as she levitated a tray of goods from the kitchen.

“Just a cup of tea if you don’t mind darling.” Rarity said as she looked for a chair to sit in only for Spike to drag up a chair, quickly dust it off, and placed a pillow for her to sit on. “Why if you keep being this helpful I might have to convince Twilight to let me borrow you from time to time.”

“Oh I see how it is Rarity. I move out and now you’re ready to replace me?” he teased her with a sad pout.

Seeing through the mock hurt she merely grinned. “No one can ever replace you darling. So shall we begin this interview? This is so exciting.”

While the two mares were excited  for the interview Naruto couldn’t help but inwardly groan. He could only hope that Rarity would only maim him slightly when it came his turn to ask the questions about her body.

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Luna and Celestia have a discussion and Naruto encounters and helps out a mare by the name of Twinkleshine. 

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A few days had passed since the Nightmare Moon incident and Ponyville was getting back to some semblance of being normal. The citizens of the small down had been rather busy cleaning up and repairing all the structures that had been damaged during the incident. Many of the business owners would find themselves swamped with paper work and having to adjust their schedules while others who were in the work field of carpentry and such found themselves earning profit thanks to increase demand of tools and materials needed for repairs.
Naruto woke up with a stir and yawned, still exhausted from last night’s events.  For the past few days he found himself running ragged to assist the Elements with their new found celebrity status. With the exception of Twilight who was in Canterlot gathering her things for her move into the town the other elements had found themselves being swamped by the town’s people.  While poni


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The two of them made sure to go over with Rarity that this detailed interview was to not only answer questions Celestia would have about the bearers, but to make sure she had a detailed file on them for a matter of reasons. One would be as a quick reference in case of a domestic issue that might result from anything ranging from kidnapping to black mail. Knowing their past and combing through it to make sure there is nothing that could be used against them.  The other was that Celestia insisted on rewarding them. Her Generosity which was one of Celestia’s most known traits besides her Kindness was known by many which in hindsight upon the return of the Elements of Harmony made since.
Celestia wasn’t kind and generous because she was secretly some evil dictator controlling everything or because she was being manipulative, those were just genuine traits to her character. The accusations all and all didn’t ma
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A few days had passed since the Nightmare Moon incident and Ponyville was getting back to some semblance of being normal. The citizens of the small down had been rather busy cleaning up and repairing all the structures that had been damaged during the incident. Many of the business owners would find themselves swamped with paper work and having to adjust their schedules while others who were in the work field of carpentry and such found themselves earning profit thanks to increase demand of tools and materials needed for repairs.

Naruto woke up with a stir and yawned, still exhausted from last night’s events.  For the past few days he found himself running ragged to assist the Elements with their new found celebrity status. With the exception of Twilight who was in Canterlot gathering her things for her move into the town the other elements had found themselves being swamped by the town’s people.  While ponies like Rarity and Pinkie Pie were thrilled, the former because of the attention it gave to her business and Pinkie Pie because she was well, Pinkie Pie and enjoyed hanging out and having fun with just everypony it was great.

Rainbow Dash out of all of them probably loved it the most. The reason was easy to note seeing that the two got along pretty great due to how well they related to each other in many matters. It had to deal with her self-esteem and near egotistical bravado.   While a lot of ponies in town saw a lean and defined Pegasus athlete it took either a Pegasus or someone who understood Pegasus to understand that Rainbow’s massive wings and shorter than normal Pegasus stature set her apart from the norm.

Applejack was in the middle, enjoying the interest because it meant better business for the farm while also hating because most of them only either gawked, took her attention away from her duties on the farm or pestered her about something or another she didn’t care about.

The one pony who wasn’t absolutely thrilled about it was of course was Fluttershy. Her crippling shyness and nice nature made it impossible for her to shoo ponies away resulting in one or more of the elements and even in some cases Naruto having to drive away the vultures. It didn’t help that a lot of new comers were clueless to Fluttershy’s sensitivity issues so that had been a whole issue in itself.

As he finished getting ready for the morning a knock on the door gained his attention. He opened the door where two armed royal guards were at his door. “Is there something I can help you with today gentlecoats?”

“You are the stallion known as Naruto correct?”  The guard on the right asked him. He was slightly taller than Naruto with an ash gray coat and jet black mane and ocean blue eyes.

“Yes I’m Naruto.”

This time the guard on the left spoke. His coat was that of a deep honey color with sky blue eyes and a grey mane with bangs hanging just above his eyes.

"You've been summoned for an audience with her majesty, Princess Celestia.  We've been ordered to escort you to the castle immediately."  

“Very well just let me lock up.” Naruto answered them, repressing a sigh. Once his home was locked up the blond got in the chariot. Naruto took the opportunity to simply take in the control side as they traveled.  Before he knew it they had arrived on the castle grounds. After exiting the chariot Naruto began making his way towards the castle.  He was already quite familiar with the layout of the castle.

The guards led him to where the Princess was waiting.

"Yes?"  Celestia’s voice called out  from the other side called out.

"Your highness.  We have brought the pony you requested as ordered. "One of the guards responded.

"Thank you.  Please send him in.”

"Yes your highness."  The two guards pushed the door open to allow Naruto in.

"Thank you both for your service.  I will be speaking with Naruto privately so I ask you return to your post of standing at the door.” She said to the guards.

“Yes your highness!” the two of them responded as the doors behind them locked.

“Good morning Celestia,” Naruto greeted her with a bow.

"A good morning to you as well Naruto.” She greeted him  with a warm smile as she led the blond to her desk.  The blond took the seat opposite of her desk. Celestia offered him some tea to which Naruto kindly rebuffed. “ I take it Ponyville has been able to recover these past few days?”

“Indeed, it’s been quite exhausting as I’ve basically had to play body guard for some of the bearers because of their new found popularity. I thought today was going to be my day off, but alas it seems like her majesty requires my services.”  He finished with an overly dramatic sigh.

Celestia could only smile at Naruto’s playful banter. “I am indeed in need of your services so to speak. I will cut to the chase.  It has to deal with my sister Luna who has plenty of good things to say about you. What I have to ask of you is important to me and you have the right not to go along with it.  If you wish to leave after we talk, I will think nothing less of you."

“I’ll keep that in mind. How is Princess Luna by the way?”

A solemn look formed on Celestia’s face. “That is what I wish to talk with you about. Ever since we left Ponyville my attempts to get Luna reintegrated into modern society have been less than successful. I was hoping that my subjects would be more understanding, but many of them fear her with some of them barely able to contain their own hostility. I knew after the incident it was going to be a long and rough period of adjustment and I fear for her mental stability if this goes on. Between dealing with the other species pulled into the incident a few days ago, going through the process of reinstating the Diarchy and dealing with the fallout of the criminals released and all the property damage I have not been able to spend as much time with my sister as I wished.  This is why I called you here this day.  She needs a friend. She needs someone who will be there for her and doesn’t see her as Nightmare Moon, someone who will not see her as a tool and as I mentioned before she has spoken positively of you.  So I ask of you, are you willing to be her friend?”

“I’m surprised you’re even asking me that. I already consider Luna my friend.”  He said as Celestia flashed him yet another warm smile.

“I am glad to hear that. I will be sending the missive out to the staff to allow you permanent access to certain areas in the castle. My sister is located in the southern wing to the castle that was once restricted.” After Celestia finished giving the rest of the instructions to where Luna was the two bid each other farewell.

To Naruto’s luck he stumbled upon Princess Luna walking down the same hallway on the way to her bedroom.

“Savior Naruto, is it thee?” the princess spoke up as she walked between the guards with a smile on her face. “By the luck of the stars it is! Tis a great pleasure for Us to see thee again! What brings thee to Canterlot?”

“Hey there Princess Luna, I actually just got finished talking with Princess Celestia about some concerns she had. She mentioned you were living in the Southern part of the castle so I’d thought I stop by.”

“And thee wished to visit Us!” she exclaimed she exclaimed with utter excitement.  It was almost impossible to relay how old Princess Luna was supposed to be and to what she looked like now. The excitement that she showed was utterly adorable. One you would expect from one much, much younger than her actual age. “Excellent! We shall retire to my quarters and partake in some confections.”

She turned to the guards and smiled. “Aquarius, Leo, head into the kitchens and bring forth something suitable for our guest. We shall take him to bed ourselves!”

‘Wait what?’ Naruto thought as the two of them were enveloped by a flash of light.

The candles allowed the room to be seen with a polished basalt floor and the large canopy bed.  The rest of the room was colored with many shades of dark blue, more than Naruto knew existed and the ceiling itself was a canopy of darkness with white twinkles that reminded him of the Night Sky. Her furniture consisted of several fancily decorated chairs of an era long past with the rest of the furniture in a furnishing that had a gothic spin to it.

“Normally it would be improper for a stallion like yourself to be in our bedchambers, but we care little for the gazes of others and seek privacy with a dear friend. “

“Its no problem Princ…” he began to speak when he was sharply cut off.

“Luna,” she  corrected him. “At least when we are in private refer to us as Luna.”

“Very well Luna, how are you doing?” he asked as she put on a false smile.

“We are fine.” She answered a little too quickly

Her response was an indication that she was anything but fine. “Luna, I know things haven’t been easy. Princess Celestia called me here because she was concerned about you.”

Luna gave out a sigh and hung her head. “So you’re here by sister’s insistence?”

“No, at least not completely by her request did I arrive.” Naruto answered her. “It’s true, Celestia called me here but she also gave me the option to leave without any persecution. I’m not here out of a request; I’m here because I’m concerned about my friend. So please talk with me and let me know what’s troubling you or maybe tell me something about you and I can tell you something about me in exchange.”

“Well,” Luna began to perk up. “Well we are the Guardian of Dreams.   During the night I would watch over the dreams of our little ponies and consult them through their dreams as well.”

“Wow that’s pretty amazing. “

“Unfortunately until more of our magic returns we shan’t be able to return to thy duty.”

“Well I look forward to seeing it in action as myself. So tell me Princess, what do you know about pranking?”

Hours had passed and the two were enjoying the food the guards had brought as Naruto told her about the pranks he used to pull with Pinkie Pie on some of the inhabitants in town.  “You and Laughter seem to be quite the trouble makers.”  

“If you think that’s crazy I should tell you some stories from my colt days.” He replied as Luna let out a quiet yet beautiful laugh.  “I don’t think I heard a laugh that quiet before.” He stated as for a brief moment Luna looked concerned.  

"You don't think it's silly?" she asked tentatively. If he did, Luna believed she did not want to know.  It wouldn’t be the first time someone pointed out Luna’s laugh.

“It’s not bad; it’s really kind of cute.”

“Thank you,”  she replied. Suddenly their attention was drawn to outside as the Sun began to set.  The two of them got up and walked to the balcony to where the sun disappeared over the Horizon and the moon began to rise. A melancholic smile formed on Luna’s face as her charge, her once prison began to take its rightful place in the sky. Luna couldn’t help but feel rather sad that she was still greatly weakened and couldn’t resume her duty of raising the moon and stars.

“Whenever the night came around when I was young I would probably spend hours looking at the moon and stars. I didn’t have that many friends during my youth so the stars myself kept me company during those lonely nights.  I would make up stories and constellations during that time and I look back on those memories with fondness. I look forward to see what you’ll be able to do once you get more of your magic back. I saw images of the constellations from over a millennium ago when I was looking up information about magical artifacts some time ago. They were amazing and I look forward to seeing more of what you can do.”

Not only did he compliment Luna, but he also complimented the very thing Luna worked her hardest on. The compliments filled her with a sense of satisfaction and an even deeper sense of gratitude. A great warmth filled her chest.

Luna reached over and pulled Naruto into a tight hug.  "Thank you." She knew the action was unbecoming of her station, being so familiar with one that wasn’t her consort or mate, but she did not care for tradition or matters at the time.

She felt the hug returned in Naruto's arms wrapping around her. "You're welcome."

The hug lasted just long enough for Luna to stop having the strong urge to cry tears of joy, and she now had a genuinely happy grin on her face. Suddenly an idea came to her mind, one that she decided to approach her sister about.  Celestia had mentioned that while she knew plenty of worthy guards that she could find to form the soon to be newly reinstated Lunar Guard there was still the manner of finding a worthy captain.  

Though, now it looked like that wasn’t going to be a problem anymore.  

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“I hope you’ll be ready to fight when the time comes.” Twilight found herself jarred out of her thoughts. The group was continuing their journey in the forest. “There’s no telling what waits for us at the end of this journey.”
Twilight couldn’t help but notice how virtually fearless the orange pony was. She couldn’t help but wonder if he was just naturally that brave or was just plain reckless. “Once we get the elements everything will work out.”
“And if we’re beaten to them?” Naruto countered her statement.
“We have to get the elements at all costs. We cannot afford to fail.”
Naruto couldn’t help but smile, this unicorn seemed to be mighty stubborn. “Just remember that no matter what happens we got your back. Just have fate in us. As long as we’re able to fight we won’t lose.”

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Luna found having to adjust to modern-day bedding was one of those small annoyances that she would have to get used to in this new era. What happened to a nice fluffy cloud bed that shifted with every subtle movement made by its owner?
The sound of light knocking caused the Moon Princess to stop her attempts at trying to sleep.  "Come in," she called out to it.
The door opened quietly, and Celestia stepped through. She had already raised the sun Luna had felt the surge of her sister's magic but the white princess was still dressed in a lilac nightie which would be considered scandalous of someone of her station. She was also without her golden crown and jewelry.
“Morning Luna, I hope my arrival was not at a bad time?”   she asked in a soft, benevolent voice.
“Neigh sister, we are far from tired merely trying to get a few hours of rest before tonight.”
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“I hope you’ll be ready to fight when the time comes.” Twilight found herself jarred out of her thoughts. The group was continuing their journey in the forest. “There’s no telling what waits for us at the end of this journey.”

Twilight couldn’t help but notice how virtually fearless the orange pony was. She couldn’t help but wonder if he was just naturally that brave or was just plain reckless. “Once we get the elements everything will work out.”

“And if we’re beaten to them?” Naruto countered her statement.

“We have to get the elements at all costs. We cannot afford to fail.”

Naruto couldn’t help but smile, this unicorn seemed to be mighty stubborn. “Just remember that no matter what happens we got your back. Just have fate in us. As long as we’re able to fight we won’t lose.”


As quick as that memory came another one soon replaced it and it was that of Twilight with Celestia in a secret training room.

“Princess, I don’t understand.” Twilight remarked as they stood in the center of the vast hall. For a room so large it was devoid of anything. No armor, no weapons mounted on the walls or even any scriptures.

“There will be a time Twilight where you might find yourself on your own and be forced to defend yourself. As such I will be teaching you how to use your magic in the use of both offensive and defensive combat magic. They will work quite well with the invisibility spell you seem quite fund of using to sneak into the library when you were younger.”

Speechless, Twilight cheeks could only burn red at this little tidbit. She didn’t understand why the princess thought she would need to learn such spells, but she would not let her down.

The memory came to an end as Twilight was staring up at her executioner.

“Now you shall perish like the others who dare stand against me.”

‘Mom, Dad, Brother, Princess…everypony…if I don’t do something then it’ll be the end of everypony.’ Twilight thought as a new found power surged through her and in a flash of pale orchid aura she teleported away from the blast. The force of Nightmare Moon’s blast shattered the ground where Twilight once stood.

“What!?” Nightmare Moon roared only for Twilight to appear back in place.

Twilight’s horns glowed as her hands radiated with magical power. Taking aim she fired an intense orchard beam of magic that coursed through the air. The beam collided with Nightmare Moon, knocking her off her hooves and to the other side of the room.

“Fool! YOU DARE TO CHALLENGE ME!?” Nightmare Moon roared as she fired a blast of her own only for Twilight to quickly counter and toss up her hands to project a barrier to protect against the powerful blast. It held long enough for the Unicorn to dodge and to fire another blast that the Alicorn narrowly dodged. She quickly recovered and dashed towards the unicorn attempting to stomp her only for her opponent to teleport again.

Twilight landed on the other side of the roof and let out a huff. She needed to find a way to temporarily stun Nightmare Moon long enough to ignite that spark to get the elements to work.

Nightmare Moon charged at Twilight, her hands glowing with magic as her next spell was about to be cast. Twilight avoided just in time as the spot she was on left black scorching marks that resulted from the blast. "Teleportation again? You can’t outrun me forever Foal.” Extending her shadow the tendrils began shooting towards wherever their master commanded.

Twilight found herself narrowly avoiding each close shave. Every time it seemed that one of the dark Alicorn attack’s was about to close in on her she managed to stay one step ahead. Every so often Twilight would shoot a beam of magic that Nightmare Moon would defend against and those brief seconds was all Twilight needed to avoid the attacks.

With every usage Twilight assessed every attack that was sent her way. She would analyze the method of attack, speed, and the angles that Nightmare Moon was sending at her.

Maneuvering around the Alicorn she fired a blast to which Nightmare Moon deflected. Once more Twilight charged as Nightmare Moon used her magic, this time manipulating the structure of the ground, breaking it into chunks and hurling them at Twilight  only for Twilight to concentrate her magic in a quick and concentrated burst concussive burst sending her up and above the Alicorn.

She quickly charged up her power again and fired a direct shot upon the Alicorn. Twilight landed far away from the Dark Alicorn panting heavily. Despite her magical prowess she was not one built for physical endurance or stamina.

The heavy magical blast created a crater that seemed to continue far down into the lower layers of the castle. Twilight turned her attention back to the five elements. Using her magic she levitated the five elements in the air.

Honesty.

Generosity.

Loyalty.

Laughter.

Kindness.

‘Come on…come on’ she silently pleaded as she waited for that spark. Once the spark would occur then Nightmare Moon would be defeated once and for all.



Meanwhile Princess Luna and Naruto continued to battle against Nightmare Moon on the inside. The two of them galloped across the widespread battleground as the beast fired multiple streams of magical blast.

Luna retaliated by shooting a dozen magical shots into Nightmare Moon's eyes, Naruto took this to fly up and slammed into her, but when his body made contact it was like slamming into a brick wall.

Before Luna could react, strands of Nightmare’s hair solidified and attacked the dark Alicorn sending her flying back. Nightmare Moon soared high into the sky as it readied to fire a beam of energy from its mouth. Luna knew if she was to survive this attack she'd have to shoot back the attack at point blank range, just as Nightmare unleashed her attack Luna fired a charged ball of energy into Nightmare's mouth! The sheer backlash of the attack forcibly sent Luna into the ground below, yet Nightmare Moon still didn't have a scratch on her!

Naruto body flickered between them, and slammed his hands into the ground causing several earth dragons to erupt from the ground and attacked the Nightmare creation. Despite the force of the attack the Nightmare once more recovered.

“Fools! Your senseless struggle only delays the inevitable!” the shadow creature remarked sending a massive shock wave causing Naruto and Luna to be sent hurtling back. The two of them quickly recovered.

Luna was the first to charge Nightmare Moon. They’re beams clashed with even more force than before! Again and again, powerful beams radiated from both dark Alicorns. The force of their last blasts caused an aftershock throughout the entire plain.

"How can you even hope to beat me? I am power incarnate. I am pure darkness.”

Just as Nightmare Moon was about to attack Luna, Naruto soared past with blinding speed and jabbed a fist full of magic into the left eye of the creature. It left out an otherworldly wail as the blonde was dislodged and sent flying when the creature snapped its head back in response.

Like before the injury was healed, but this time it wasn’t a matter of seconds before the wound was healed. “ Luna her ability to heal seems to be weakening. We need to hit her hard and fast enough consecutively so we can dead lock her into using all her power to heal.”

“Then allow me.” Luna said as cracks began to form under Nightmare Moon. A violet and black orb appeared between the ground and the creature. It then dispersed into electrical like pulses and the creature was soon crushed into the ground by a powerful force. Sure enough the princess had called upon the power of gravity itself to keep the beast at bay.

Naruto took the opportunity to begin calling upon as much power as he could. Since the creature was no longer able to feed on Luna’s emotions than it lost its means to remain an invincible mental plague.

Once more instinct took over and Naruto fired the attack out of his makeshift horn. The attacked impacted and it exploded into a destructive cyclone that rendered much of the ground below a crater.


Back in the waking world Twilight tried with all of her might to get the Elements to work. Nightmare Moon recovered from the pit to see the five Elements glowing and encircling Twilight. “No!” she shrieked as the Elements began to power up only for the glow to fade and the five elements to lifelessly drop to the ground and shatter.

Twilight Sparkle gasped as she was overcome with confusion. She looked down at the remains of the elements closest to her. “But…where’s the sixth Element?” she didn’t understand. What happened?

Nightmare Moon laughed malignantly as she felt her victory was now secured. “You little foal! Thinking you could defeat me? Now you will never see your princess, or your sun! The night will last forever!”

‘I…I failed.’ Twilight thought before she found herself blasted across the room by Nightmare Moon’s magic.  Pain. Searing and relentless pain coursed through her as she landed on the ground. ‘Move…I got to move.’ She thought as her body refused to listen. Twilight could only watch in terror as Nightmare Moon moved closer.

Nightmare Moon gave paused when she found herself erected a barrier to stop as assortment of weapons flung at her. To her displeasure the five ponies she told her troops to capture had made their way. ‘Worthless peons must I do everything myself?’

Twilight suddenly found herself bombarded by a series of statements.

“Ya alright Sugarcube?”

“I’m g-glad w-we got here just in time.”

“What did she do to you?”

“We got here as soon as we could.”

“You’re going to be okay right?”

Twilight couldn’t believe it. They came. They really did and by the condition they were in they looked like hell. Bruises, cuts, scrapes, and patches of dried up blood. The condition of their outfits was caked with grime as well as well as foliage from the forest. They could have left. They could have abandoned her, but they didn’t. For a moment she wanted to rationalize they were here to see if the Elements were acquired because they were the only things capable of stopping Nightmare Moon, but their concern for her squashed that little theory.

Had Spike been right? Had Naruto been right?

“I suppose this saves me time,” Nightmare Moon began talking as her voice was filled with smug overtones. “I’ll eliminate all six of you at once.”

Suddenly the others mares went from comforting Twilight to going serious. The transition was almost frightening.

“Ya took from me a pony ah considered kin and ah won’t stop til ah you’ve been taken down.” Applejack remarked as she tipped her hat back.

“You took my bro from me and I won’t stop til your flank is stomped into paste.” Rainbow Dash remarked as her wings extended and adjusted themselves in a threatening matter.

“You are more than mean you are just plain cruel. I don’t like being mean to other ponies, but just this one time I’ll make an exception.” Pinkie Pie moved into a fighting stance for the purpose of doing harm for the first time in a long time.

“You took one of my dearest friends from me. Just this one time I will drop being a lady and make you regret ever coming into our town. “ Rarity telekinetic-ally drew back the weapons she hurled earlier.

“I will not run. You took my friend and because of that I will fight to stop you from hurting anypony else.” Without a stammer or pause even Fluttershy was ready to fight.

They charged attacking Nightmare Moon with everything they had. The Nightmare easily blocked the blades Rarity hurled at her with her barrier before firing a blast of magic from her hand sending the Unicorn flying back.

Rainbow Dash was upon the Alicorn in an instant and swung with all of her might with her good arm only for her to miss. She was stunned for a moment only for Nightmare Moon’s taunting laughter served to further infuriate her. “Shut the buck up!” Rainbow Dash screamed as punch by punch was easily dodged by her opponent.

Nightmare Moon appeared by Rainbow Dash in a flash, a ball of magic in her hand and pressed into Dash’s gut. “Looks like you can’t keep up with my speed!” she whispered in the Pegasus ear before blasting her and sending her flying.

“STOP! HOW DARE YOU DO THAT TO MY FRIENDS!”  Fluttershy snapped as she hit Nightmare Moon with the full force of her stare.

Nightmare Moon angrily let out a hiss and threw back her arm, hitting the mare with a wave of dark magic sending her flying back. “The power of Penance stare. To think one such as yourself has it.”

With a yell befitting of a wild Pinkie Pie began to charge. Nightmare Moon fired a wave of magical spheres that Pinkie Pie leaped and dodged over. Leaping forward Pinkie Pie curled back her arm and threw a punch only for her first to meet a barrier. She then let out a wail as the barrier blasted her backwards.

Applejack attacked with everything she had, but her strength proved to be ineffective as Nightmare moon  countered the mare’s strength with her own, causing cracks in the floor. Like the others she was simply hurled back by the mighty Alicorn’s power.

Nightmare Moon than began gathering power in her right hand. A black sphere the size of a head slowly grew as a malevolent mauve energy radiated from it along with lilac and chrome energy sparkles. She trained her eyes on the crumple heap of defeated mares.  It seemed like such a waste. Less subjects to worship her greatness, but they could not be allowed to live. “And with this last act I will rule over this planet as its Queen.”

“No…” Twilight whispered as she pushed herself to her feet. They were going to die. “No…” Twilight cried out as an intense pain filled her chest. “I won’t…”

"Applejack! What do I do?"  A panicked Twilight cried out as she could feel herself slipping. The chocked sob did not escape Applejacks notice did notice as she tried her best to pull Twilight up, but it felt like something was slowly draining her of her strength.  What should have been Child splay for someone like Applejack to easily hoist Twilight up was proving a considerable challenge and if something wasn’t done soon they were both going to tumble over.   She glanced over the side and then realized what needed to be done.

As calmly as she could Applejack told the unicorn two simple words. “Let go.”

Panicked spread in Twilight’s eyes as she gave the other mare an incredulous look as she wondered if she misheard her. The determined look in Applejack’s eyes assured Twilight that her hearing was functioning correctly. "Are you crazy?" Twilight cried out as she lost any semblance of her usual composure.

"No ah ain't. Ah promise you'll be safe." Applejack told her earnestly. She could see the Unicorn was filled with doubts and was scared.

"That's not true!" she didn’t want to die. She had so much to live for. She couldn’t let go. She was too scared. How could this Applejack ask her to let go?

"Now listen here. What ah'm sayin' to you is the honest truth. Let go, and you'll be safe."  Applejack insured her again as warmly as she could. “This ledge won’t hold for long. Just trust me ah wouldn’t steer you wrong.”

“…let…”

"How did you know about the spell?” Twilight asked, in awe of whatever it was Fluttershy had done.  

"I didn't at first, not until he got closer and I saw his eyes. Sometimes we all just need to be show some understanding and  a little kindness." Fluttershy responded. After hearing this, Twilight smiled.

“…you…”

"Pinkie Pie, what are you doing?!  Get away from that thing." Twilight shouted at her.

“There’s nothing to be afraid of.” Pinkie cheerfully remarked. “When I was a little filly and scared of darkness and shadows my Granny, Granny Pie told me that being afraid and hiding wasn’t the way to deal with your fears.  You gotta stand up tall and learn to face your fears.  You'll see that they can't hurt you and just laugh to make them disappear." She remarked as she continued making faces and laughing.

“…hurt…”

"Oh, Rarity, your beautiful tail..."  Twilight softly remark in awe of her fellow Unicorn’s sacrifice in the form of her tail. Of everything Twilight had witnessed of the mare she seemed practically obsessed with cleanliness, being proper, and faction. The fact she was willing to sacrifice her tail like that was one of the most generous things Twilight had ever seen.

"Oh its fine, my dear. Short tails are in this season. Besides, it'll grow back." Despite the brave face the unicorn was putting, it was obvious it took a lot from her to do something like that.

“…them...”

“I appreciate the offer and all, but I had to make the choice of leaving my childhood friend behind to continue this quest. I could never forgive myself if I turned my back on her and made that sacrifice meaningless.  So I’m going to have to say no.”   The Shadowbolts then disappeared.  Indeed finding additional rope Rainbow fixed the path allowing Naruto and Rainbow to walk over the gorge as they approached the ruins.

''...die!"

At that moment something triggered within Twilight.  Her power exploded in a way she hadn’t felt since the day she got her Cutie Mark.  She focused that raw and powerful magic and blasted Nightmare Moon.

The attack was so powerful that it tore through the barrier that Nightmare Moon erected and sending her crashing through one of the walls.

Twilight stumbled forward, catching herself as she let out a tired breath. She began walking over to the others who began to recover. “Thank goodness…you’re all okay.”

“Whoa Twilight, that was pretty bad flank. Remind me never to get on your bad side,” Rainbow joked with a weak chuckle. The others murmured similar light hearted sentiments. The dark grew stale and cold as a furious Nightmare Moon teleported back into the room.

“You truly are a fool. I was going to make your death quick, but now I’ll truly make you suffer.  This battle was over the moment the Elements shattered yet you continue to prolong the inevitable.”

At that moment Twilight had an epiphany. The answer had been staring her in the face the whole time and she hadn’t seen it until now. She…she would not give up. “It’s not over. You think you can destroy The Elements of Harmony just like that? Well, you're wrong; because the spirits of The Elements of Harmony are right here in these ponies.” The shards of the five elements began to glow with new life and surround the five ponies. The five looked at the phenomenon in Awe.

“Applejack, who reassured me when I was in doubt, represents the spirit of... honesty!” The element reconstituted. The element of Honesty now resided on the farm mare’s neck in the shape of a gold necklace with an orange and green apple-shaped gem.

“Fluttershy, who tamed the Manticore with her compassion, represents the spirit of... kindness!” once more the Element manifested into a gold necklace but with a pink butterfly-shaped gem, shaped similarly to her cutie mark which suited the animal talker.

This time it was now the Pony of Laughter. “Pinkie Pie, who banished fear by giggling in the face of danger, represents the spirit of... laughter!” her shape was that of a blue balloon-shaped gem that looks similar to her cutie mark.

“Rarity, who calmed a sorrowful serpent with a meaningful gift represents the spirit of... generosity!” the proper pony’s gold necklace contained a purple diamond-shaped gem, similar to her cutie mark.

“And Rainbow Dash, who could not abandon her friends for her own heart's desire represents the spirit of... loyalty!” And who could forget the boisterous flier whose element manifested as a gold necklace with a red thunderbolt-shaped gem, similar to her cutie mark.

“The spirits of these five ponies got us through not only your forces but every challenge you threw at us. Thanks to them and another friend of mine I finally realized the truth behind the elements.”

“You fool I have long known the identity of these bearers; you still fight a fruitless battle without the Sixth Element. You’re attempt at a spark did not work!” Nightmare Moon cried out in frustration, hunting for her only solution to her own dreaded nightmare.

Confident Twilight Sparkle continued. “But it did! A different kind of spark. I felt it the very moment I realized when I was about to lose them. The moment I realized I cared about my friends. The spark ignited inside me when I realized that the ponies I met and that traveled with me here this night are my friends. Hence how I discovered the secret that recreates the sixth element, ignited by the spark that resides in all of us…the element of... magic!” At long last the lost sixth element manifested itself as a gold tiara with a set of oval-shaped sapphires and a magenta star-shaped gem, similar to Twilight’s cutie mark. It rested upon her head and with that the Elements activated.

The power of the six combined into a rainbow of sorts. The power coursed through the air and began making its way towards the Alicorn.

“I WON’T BE DEFEATED BY THE LIKES OF YOU!” Nightmare Moon lost all semblance of control and fired all the power she could muster at the beam. The two forces dead locked for a moment before the Alicorn’s beam was slowly being driven back.


Back within the recesses of Luna’s mind Nightmare Moon emerged from the crater sporting wounds for the first time since the battle begun. Before he could continue the attack Nightmare Moon materialized large spheres of water before her. They soon materialized into spheres of ice shaped into javelins and were hurled at the blond.

Naruto flew back, maneuvering out of the way out of the javelins that soon exploded into splinters. Before he could react he found himself shielded by a barrier. While simultaneously shielding Naruto the Alicorn rammed into Nightmare Moon.

Before the creature could attack Naruto dropped down, slamming into its head with his hooves shattering the helmet. He jumped back as the Princess fired another beam of magic sending the evil Alicorn crashing back. Nightmare Moon soon exploded with power.

“I will not be defeated by the likes of you wretches!” The power the Alicorn was summoning began to expand, growing and growing until it began to dwarf even its master in size. An attack of that size would wipe all of them out.

“Luna you have to finish her now!” Naruto shouted as he flashed over to her side. “The only way to win a battle of the mind is for that person to overcome their demons once and for all.”

“We don’t know if we have the power.” Nightmare Moon was as every bit as powerful as she was if not more.

“Then I’ll help you.” Like that day during the war Naruto transferred some of his chakra to Princess Luna. The Princess found herself enveloped by a warm yet powerful golden glow.

Teeming with power the Princess called upon deepest recess of her magic. And in one single blast the power fired at the tainted Alicorn quickly overwhelmed the creature.

“I will…never…fade…”

And with that the creature then faded out of existence. Back on the outside the Elements won the beam struggle. The massive double rainbow swirled around Nightmare Moon like a tornado, before engulfing the entire room in a bright light.

When the light faded, the six Element bearers were sprawled out upon the floor. As they began conversing with one another, Naruto materialized out of a faint white light. “Uugh, felt like I tanked a world Rasengan to the face.” He groaned as he fell to his hands and feet.


“Naruto!” five happy cries echoed followed by a group glomp. Naruto let out a whinny of pain as he found himself tackled to the ground.

“I’m so glad you’re alright.”  

“Ya alright Sugarcube?”

“I knew my bro was tougher than that.”

“I’m so happy you’re alive! I’m so going to throw you ‘really glad you weren’t swallowed up by Nightmare Moon’s evil darkness party.”

“Oh darling you gave me quite a fright don’t you ever do that again.”

Twilight looked upon the scene with a smile on her face. She didn’t know how, but despite the mare’s assurance that the stallion was gone she somehow felt in her heart that wasn’t the case.

“I’m fine…let me breath please.” Naruto pleaded before they finally let the blond up.  The smoke cleared only to reveal the form of Luna and a crystal. The crystal soon shattered and faded away, the wind carrying the powder to parts unknown.

Suddenly the brightness of the Sun’s glow drew his attention. He looked on in surprise at the newest arrival. It was none other than the Princess of the Sun herself Celestia.  The ponies bowed in reverence of the new arrival, while Twilight ran up to her and happily hugged the ruler, overcome with so much emotion that any thought of decorum flew out the window to which the taller mare returned the gesture.  “Twilight Sparkle, my faithful student I knew you could do it. “

Twilight seemed stunned at this revelation. “Princes…you…you made it seem like it was an old fairy tale. Nightmare Moon’s returning…why?”

“I told you that you needed to make some friends, nothing more. I saw the signs of Nightmare Moon's return and I knew it was you who had the magic inside to defeat her, but you could not unleash it until you let true friendship into your heart. Which never would have happened if you were approaching it like a mission, your feelings wouldn’t have been genuine. Now I hope another as well will be ready to open her heart.” Celestia turned her attention to Luna. “Princess Luna!”

The princess of night that stood opposite of Celestia looked hardly over the age or twelve or thirteen. It was obvious the Elements purging her of her darkness caused this effect. The Svelete alicorn had the makings of an early bloomer at that age with the same gown she wore in the Mindscape except reaching to above her knees instead of at her ankles. The way her ears held low and her expression the shame that the younger Alicorn held on to was obvious.

“It has been a thousand years sister. I’ve waited so long to say this.” Luna seemed to seize up as to brace herself for her sister’s wrath. “I’m sorry.” Luna seemed stunned silence. Despite remembering the memory she saw during the battle reminding her of their sisterly bond she felt and believe what was going to happen in the real world would be anything but that. “I failed to be there for you and because of my mistakes you had to suffer for a thousand years. No matter our differences we are family and we should never let anything tear us apart. Its time to put our differences behind us. We were meant to rule together, little sister. Will you accept my friendship?"

"I'm so sorry!" She ran up and threw her arms around Celestia, more happy tears running down her face, "I missed you so much, big sister!"

Celestia began to tear up as well, "I've missed you, too."

The group made their journey out of the old castle where the able body soldiers from the guard had gathered.  General Esteem and Shine Spark were there to greet their majesty.

The guard troopers naturally went on guard at the sight of the new Alicorn.  Celestia picked upon it immediately, followed by Naruto and then Twilight.  Princess Luna features were too similar to Nightmare Moon to ignore, including the fact that the symbol of her cutie mark was branded on the side of the dress.

“Stand down, my little ponies,” Celestia stated, putting a comforting wing over the back of smaller, somewhat startled Alicorn next to her.

“You heard her majesty! Stand down!” General Esteem’s deep voice boomed across a great distance. The soldiers didn’t need to be told twice.

“This is a momentous day,” Celestia announced, a certain joy in her voice that her subject couldn’t remember having ever heard before. “My sister, Princess Luna, the Princess of the Night has returned!”


The citizens of Ponyille began to cheer and celebrate the return of their Princess. News began to spread around fast as members of the Pegasi guard began sending emergency messages to the nearby towns.

A scroll was sent to Canterlot to get in contact with Celestia’s personal assistant Raven within instructions to send Celestia’s emergency communication crystal so she could get in contact with mayors and council of Equestria’s major cities to check up on the condition of the cities.

Many of the renegades and thugs that had joined under Nightmare Moon had been apprehended and jailed with a great deal of them having escaped and gone into hiding. There were also the unfortunate consequences of many causalities, injuries, and property damage that would take weeks if not months to sort out.

Though as callous as it was, Celestia decided for right now she would allow the council she formed to handle such matters handle it for the time being before she began to personally look into the matter herself. She knew she was being selfish, but her long lost baby sister had returned and she dared not repeat the same mistakes that drove Luna away in the first place.

Things were beginning to settle in Ponyville with a new celebration under way. The Summer Sun Festival itself was postponed in favor of what was going to be the first of many celebrations held for Princess Luna welcoming her return.  Despite the smiles her subject put on before her Celestia was no fool. Being a ruler for as long as she had been gave her ample opportunities to see darkness that most ponies would go their whole lives through with only a mere glance.

The actions of Nightmare Moon were not going to be without consequences. Whether it is the result of loved ones lost or one’s livelihoods ruined by the missing sun it would be quite some time until things were going to find a semblance of normalcy again. The only thing she could do was ease the process for both her subjects and her sister.

Celestia was stirred from her thoughts as her faithful student Twilight Sparkle approached her.  She smiled at Twilight as she approached.

“Hello, Twilight,” Celestia said. She gestured at the mug in her hands. “Tell Applejack that this is this cider of hers is simply delightful. I must remember to send for a few orders of barrel.”  

“I’ll be sure to do so Princess,” Twilight said, sitting down next to her.   “So, where is Princess Luna?" she asked as she peered across the room.

Celestia pointed out to a space far away from the crowds, and Twilight soon spotted Princess Luna and Naruto conversing in a corner.  Princess Luna wore a shy smile as their attention was drawn by a shouting Pinkie Pie.

The mare strolled over and wrapped her arms around the two and dragged them onto the dance floor. They were soon surrounded by a bunch of ponies and Luna’s expression morphed into one of pure joy.  "I'm so glad that she's enjoying herself," Celestia said. "I was worried about how everypony would react to her, knowing who she once was."

"This town is pretty accepting of newcomers," Twilight said. "I know that first-hand."

Celestia looked at her apprentice, noticing the almost wistful look on Twilight's face. "Is there something wrong, Twilight?" She asked. "You seem troubled. Are you not happy that your quest is complete and you can return to your studies in Canterlot?”

Twilight turned to speak up as she inquired a war going on within her heart. “That's just it. Just when I finally learned how wonderful it is to have friends, I have to leave them.” Twilight did her best to suppress her sadness, but was failing to do so.  She wanted to get to know all of them more.

A warm motherly smile formed on Princess Celestia’s face as she made a decision. Celestia called out to Spike from the crowd and ask one of the guards if they could bring a scroll and quill. “Spike, take a note, please. I, Princess Celestia, hereby decree that the unicorn Twilight shall take on a new mission for Equestria. She will be studying the nature of the magic of friendship by gaining a better understanding of the virtues of Honesty, Loyalty, Kindness, Generosity, and  Laughter. A mission she can only complete from Ponyville to which she will be relocating to until further notice.” That resulted in a sudden rich cheer erupting forth from the gathered crowds, delighted at the prospect of the mare living among them for some time to come. “I'll be expecting you to send me regular reports on your findings via dragonfire, of course.”

“Once a week. I promise.” Twilight answered delighted.  With that the celebration continued.  

SANM Part 3! Ch 14! Harmony Rises!
The final battle with Nightmare Moon arrives  as the battle for Luna's soul reach its conclusion. 

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Naruto wasn't sure how long the attack had rendered him unconscious, but it was enough to greatly disorient him. When he finally started to feel better he was able to grasp that he wasn't in the physical realm. This was rather surprising as he thought he would have woken up in the dungeon instead of the vast and lifeless rocky terrain he was currently in.
For a moment he wondered just where he was when a stray thought came to his mind. 'Is this the moon?' he couldn't help but wonder to himself. He looked up and sure enough it was the night sky filled with the white twinkling lights of the stars themselves. Other familiar celestial bodies filled the area including what he learned not so long ago were constellations. Since he was in the mental plane he didn't need to worry about whatever measures one would have needed to survive out here.
Naruto tried calling to Kurama but received no answer in return. 'I thought as much.' He sullenly though


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A few days had passed since the Nightmare Moon incident and Ponyville was getting back to some semblance of being normal. The citizens of the small down had been rather busy cleaning up and repairing all the structures that had been damaged during the incident. Many of the business owners would find themselves swamped with paper work and having to adjust their schedules while others who were in the work field of carpentry and such found themselves earning profit thanks to increase demand of tools and materials needed for repairs.
Naruto woke up with a stir and yawned, still exhausted from last night’s events.  For the past few days he found himself running ragged to assist the Elements with their new found celebrity status. With the exception of Twilight who was in Canterlot gathering her things for her move into the town the other elements had found themselves being swamped by the town’s people.  While poni
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Naruto wasn't sure how long the attack had rendered him unconscious, but it was enough to greatly disorient him. When he finally started to feel better he was able to grasp that he wasn't in the physical realm. This was rather surprising as he thought he would have woken up in the dungeon instead of the vast and lifeless rocky terrain he was currently in.

For a moment he wondered just where he was when a stray thought came to his mind. 'Is this the moon?' he couldn't help but wonder to himself. He looked up and sure enough it was the night sky filled with the white twinkling lights of the stars themselves. Other familiar celestial bodies filled the area including what he learned not so long ago were constellations. Since he was in the mental plane he didn't need to worry about whatever measures one would have needed to survive out here.

Naruto tried calling to Kurama but received no answer in return. 'I thought as much.' He sullenly thought as he began his journey. Time most likely did not exist in this type of realm. So there was no telling how long he was going to be walking. He kept going until he saw the faint glow of magical aura. Naruto readied himself for a fight until he heard the faint sound of crying. His eyes widened briefly in confusion before he ventured closer to the origin only to find deep within the crater the cage.

The cage contained what looked like a young filly Alicorn. She looked hardly older than the crusaders. Her coat was that of a light phtalo shade. The svelte little pony was wearing a simple dark blue dress with the insignia of the moon on the front of it. As he got closer he took more of her features, her mane and tail colors were that of a light azure color and the Alicorn filly looked so sad it almost broke his heart.

"W-Who are you?" she asked in a whimpering tone as her voice cracked slightly. Her eyes were filled with a lot of fear.

"I'm not going to hurt you," he softly spoke to her as he got closer. "My name is Naruto what's yours?" he asked as he approached the cage but the Pony only shot him a furious look as a frown marred her features.

"We shall not for your tricks again. Just leave us alone. " She wailed as tears began to whirl up in her eyes. Suddenly she seemed to switch gears as she looked off into space. "Where are you Big sister? W-We are so sorry please don't be mad at me anymore. I don't like being alone." The tears slid down her face. "T-Tia…d-don't you love me anymore?" she asked in between sniffles as she sat down and curled up in a ball.




Naruto's heart went out to this filly. Seeing how broken this pony was. He couldn't help but relate her situation being similar to that of a Jinchuuriki. Essentially what he was seeing was the fate of a container overwhelmed and consumed by what they kept at bay essentially.

He knew what he had to do. Having long embraced the willpower of making a mindscape his own Naruto easily bypassed the cage. He then pulled the pony in the hug causing her to gasp.

"You're not alone anymore." He gently whispered into her ear as he gently pat her back. "I won't hurt you. I'll do everything I can to help you." He continued the comforting hug.

For the first time the little mare felt something other than loneliness and despair. For the first time in a thousand years she had done something she thought she lost the will to do. And that was Smile.

She then whispered something that Naruto didn't catch.

"Excuse me?" Naruto asked, missing what the mare had just said. He suddenly pulled back, realizing that he still had her in his arms.

The little Alicorn let out a rather bashful like gasp. She took a moment before composing herself. "Our name is Luna." She introduced herself a little more confident.

"I see." He figured it had something to do with the moon. Everything was starting to make sense now. "A nice name for such a cute little mare." Naruto playfully complimented her. The filly looked so adorable the words kawaii sprung to mind.

Luna on the other hand took it completely different and began blushing. "W-Who gave thee permission to be so familiar with us? We are a Princess and are several millennium old." Princess Luna had switched from questioning to an embarrassed huff in a matter of seconds.

Naruto let out a chuckle and stood up. He smiled graced his lips and he extended his hand. "Forgive me for my familiarity your highness. I believe its time for us to go."

"Go?" she asked the stallion as she blank and shot him a questioning look as she tried to figure out what the blond was planning to do.. "Go where?" Where did he expect them to go.

Once more he smiled at warm smile and placed his palms on the shoulder of the Alicorn. "Back to Equestria." He informed her as he glanced to the left and right as if he was trying to decide which direction they should go. "One way or another I'll get you out of here."

A downcast look formed on Luna's face. "I-It's no use. I've tried…I've tried for so long but she won't let me. It won't let me." As soon as she finished that sentence utter fear spread across her face. "She's here." Luna uttered in a tone of a frightened child as a pool of darkness seeped across the rocky landscape. It slowly pulled up and formed into the shape of Nightmare Moon.

"Your insolence knows no bounds. To think you managed to find your way here. You have proven to be more trouble then you're worth so I shall correct the issue and eliminate you."As Nightmare Moon spoke twin voices echoed from the creature's mouth and one of those voices Naruto remembered all too well. That voice was of the same creature that attacked him on the world that Naruto had visited all those years ago.

How could he ever forget?

Hagoromo had taught him the secrets of traveling throughout the ages once Naruto's first life time had finally reached its end. Chakra, the power that fueled the people of his world was more than just mere physical and mental energy; the life force of chakra connected both the living and the world of the dead as the tree that bore the fruit of life in his world was just one of many seeds planted across various worlds many eons ago. After all Kaguya herself was not a native to his world so it only proved the existence of other worlds and life forms out there.

One of those beings was a creature of darkness that seemed intent on hunting down and eliminating the seeds to fill the Cosmos with darkness. "Shadowfright!" the blond's whisper was filled with utter loathing. Naruto was more than sure that this creature played a part in the events of the Nightmare scenario.

"Do you think a mere Earth pony can save you Luna? Even your sister chose to seal you away instead of trying to help you. You need me. I make us strong. Without me you'll go back to being the mare no one cared about while everyone loved and worshiped your older sister." The cruel words exited the mouth of Nightmare Moon as persuasively and slickly began breaking down Luna's self-worth once more.

"Shut your mouth you cruel ignorant beast." Naruto roared as his emotions spiked. "I won't let you hurt her anymore." He said as a vast aura of bright violet chakra washed over the blond. 'There's enough, there's just enough of his chakra.' Naruto thought as his orange coat radiated a bright yellow sheen.

The shadows that made Nightmare's Moon began to grow in surprise. It then came to life as it shot out several tendrils at the orange stallion.

Naruto quickly scooped up the surprised Luna into his front arms and leaped away from the attack. He landed and gently placed her down. "Are you alright?"

"Y-Yes."

"Don't worry; I won't let that thing hurt you." He said as he began concentrating. Hundreds upon hundreds of identical white smokes puffed into existence as an army of identical copies formed between them and Nightmare Moon.

Luna couldn't help but gaze in awe. What manner of magic was this? Even at their strongest with the Elements of Harmony the Alicorn sisters wouldn't have been able to make so many tangible copies of themselves. "Your tricks are useless mortal!" Nightmare howled as the end of her hands split and formed into nightmarish claws, her mane becoming sharp like thorns and her teeth forming into fangs. She began bulldozing through the clones like they were plastic toys.

The creature let out a wide area blast of magic from her horn. She took to the sky as her the aura around her horn darkened.

Naruto charged forward calling his clones to him. Two clones came to a dead stop allowing Naruto and one of his clones to leap off their backs like foot stools. The two of them descended into the air as they soared at the flying creature. The clone took the original by the hooves and swung him with all his might.

Tucking himself into a ball, Naruto soared at the creature with impressive speed, but it proved too slow as Nightmare Moon merely flew out of the way. She then charged after the blond with breakneck speed. Naruto landed only to narrowly miss his neck being torn out, the claws of the Alicorn slashing at his neck.

Naruto let out a gargled cry of pain as the sensation flooded through him. This was no normal mindscape dimension. Any physical injuries caused by that creature were going to prove fatal so he needed to be careful.

He found himself going on the defensive as the creature jabbed and slashed at him with near supersonic speeds. The taste of copper filled his mouth and he found himself dazed. A pain coursed through him and Naruto had already figured it was some sort of magical attack.

His body skidded across the round with a few tumbles as he heard the nightmarish roar. He let out a blood fill coughed as he quickly recovered. Catching his opponent off guard he rammed into her with all his might. He gritted his teeth landing on his hands and knees as Nightmare Moon was momentarily off balance. He leaped again; head butting her again using the time to press the attack only for Nightmare Moon to sink her teeth into the flesh of his shoulder.

"No!" Luna's voice cried out as she drew upon whatever magic her small body contained and released it upon Nightmare Moon sending it flying, while dislodging its vice like grip on the blond's shoulder.

"Warrior!" Luna cried out to his, rushing to his side and helping him up. "W-We can't win. W-We can't beat her we have to run." She pleaded with him.

"I can't…" Naruto said in between pained breaths as he went about composing himself.

"Why is thee being so stubborn? Thy hath barely met us for a forth night. Why risk so much for us?" she didn't understand. Was it some misconstrued loyalty or honor he was raised with? Why was he risking his life to help her? At that moment Luna felt so ashamed and weak unable to follow her vow to help and protect one of her loyal subjects in need. "We…as your Princess order you to go."

A weak smile formed on Naruto's face. "Then I have to disregard your order Princess Luna. I made a promise to help you and I never go back on my promises." He remarked as he steadied himself. Nightmare Moon radiated with a near soul crushing black darkness. The angelic like wings twisted and began to change shape into something more befitting of a demon.

"You're too weak Luuuuuuna. You can't even protect one pony. Is it any wonder your subjects so readily forgot you?" Luna was about to argue but then a memory flooded through her mind. It was Nightmare Moon's arrival and how no one seemed to recognize or know her name. "Your own sister even with about changing the history of the nation to disregard your existence." The creature taunted. Tears began pouring down from the Alicorn's eyes, sliding down her cheeks as she hung her head low. The darkness seemed to take great pleasure in reminding her how forgotten she had become. A memory of the past came to mind.

"Tia please…I had enough. Help me." She found herself unable to break out of this dream-like state. Why couldn't she wake up? Why couldn't she go back to Equestria?

"Foolish foal there is no going back. Your sister has locked you away forever within the body you governed."

"Liar…Tia would never do that!"

"Your sister has banished you leaving you to rot while she rules Equestria."

No, this couldn't be true. There was no way that her sister would banish her! Her loving big sister would never do that to her.

"You're lying to yourself! You were a threat to her power! Her vision! An obstacle to remove!"

"Stop it! Thine attempt to cause me to fall into an ardent manner will not work." It wasn't supposed to go like this. She just wanted the love and respect of their citizens. It was never supposed to go this out of hand. How did things go so wrong? How did they go wrong?

Images like painted scenes filled her mind. Of the beauty of the moon being ignored as everypony love and frolicked in the sun.

"It matters not Princess! Once we break free we shall show them the beauty of eternal night. "

There was no telling how long it would take. And because she had succumbed to the darkness in her heart she would probably never she those who meant the world to her again. "What… what have I done?"

"You chose the path to power. We will make them all fear and worship the night!"

With force neither thought was capable from the stallion Naruto disappeared from his place and in front of Nightmare Moon. The force of his hit sending the dark Alicorn flying down into the surface and causing a crater. "You make me sick parasite!" Luna found herself brought out of her daze. Nightmare Moon seemed to be once again trying to break her spirit.

"How dare you. I will take great pleasure in crushing you beneath my hooves!" roared the manifestation of darkness, quickly recovering from the attack. Before even getting a chance to begin the assault the dark Alicorn found herself launched into the air by a kick to the jaw. Naruto appeared behind her, gripping her in a bear hug. "Omote Renge!" they began spinning, forming a oval shaped or orange and black before Naruto jumped away, letting her collide with the ground. Thankfully while physical injury was real in this realm, things like exhaustion or such didn't seem to affect him.

A near blinding aura of dark magic erupted from the crater from the last attack. Nightmare Moon had grown three times her size. Nightmare Moon then let out a mixture between a shriek and roar as thousands upon thousands of beams of magical energy began to bombard the blond.

The sound of Naruto's steps echoed across the ground echoed as he jumped and leaped out of the way avoiding the various beams. He quickly created clones which were quickly dispatched by the attack. With each every hand full of clones destroyed he was beginning to see a pattern to the creature's attack.

He slowly began making his way to the creature whose attacks continued to bombard him. He charged forward and attempted to Rasengan only for several beams to strike him and send him crashing to the ground.

Naruto began his assault again only this time channeling his element. His hands were encircled by little wisps of wind as he started dodging her assault. As he was hit directly by one of the blasts Naruto powered through it. Dropping on the ground, he put all his strength into his legs and jumped forward. Using his front legs he began delivering a barrage of punches to the opponent, and then finished with an uppercut, creating a large gust of wind throwing the evil Alicorn into the air.

Despite the attack the dark creature didn't have nary a scratch. A growl escaped Naruto's lips, but he didn't let that deter him. He continued pressing the attack, overwhelming her with thousands of clones and even following up with a wind infused Rasengan but no matter how much damaged he did the creature seemed to shake it off.

'It's hopeless!' Luna thought to herself. 'Nightmare Moon isn't a tangible being. It has no true form and it can't be killed.'

Naruto continued his attack. Maybe if he kept on attacking maybe the creature would spend its energy healing. He charged forward with a right hook only to hit air. 'I missed?' he pondered for a second. He then quickly spun and avoided a blast of energy as the creature attempted to bring her powerful fists down to crush his skull. Naruto twisted out of the way and swung with his left hoof only for the sound of swishing air to occur. 'No…how?' he thought as her fist collided with his side sending him flying.

Luna remembered her first encounter with the Nightmare. No matter how hard or how much she fought it didn't seem to matter. It just took all of her attacks without so much as a scratch.

As she watched Naruto try to stop it she couldn't take it anymore. "Stop! Stop it!" she landed in between the two. "No more! Thou wants me right? Then the treasure is right before thou on the grounds you leave thy warrior in peace." She wasn't going to stand by anymore. She would not let this brave soul die while she stood by, too cowardly to do anything.

"It is far too late Princess. You are too weak and broken to fight me off for much longer." Nightmare's voice was now decadently masculine and familiar.

"Don't give up Luna!" Naruto pleaded as he pushed himself to his hooves. "This is your mind. That parasite is trying to make you think you're weaker than it is, but you're not. Its been a thousand years and its failed to change you. You're stronger than it'll ever be." He encouraged her.

Luna's head bow in shame. "Tis my weakness that allowed this abomination to come to surface. This truly is thy penance and responsibility."

"No one is perfect Luna. Don't let this creature win." He pleaded with her. "If we let this thing win it'll be the end of everything. It'll be the end of all life on this planet and your sister. "

Suddenly another memory came to mind. One in regards to her youth long before she and Celestia were rulers.


It was a rather stormy night and Luna had just had a night terror. A whimper had escaped her lips and terror coursed through her. She found herself unable to go back to sleep.

Every sound of creek sent spine tingling terror through her. The shapes that the looming shadows that seemed to litter her room caused nothing but unrest. She found herself unable to drift back to sleep. Without a second thought she dashed out of her room and into her sister's room next-door. When she woke her sister up she had tears streaming down her face.

"It's alright Luna." Using her wings Celestia had wiped the tears from her frightened sister's eyes. 'Why don't you sleep with me for the night? I'll keep you safe from the shadows.' That feeling, Luna gripped to that feeling. That wonderful feeling of having Celestia as a big sister.

Luna suddenly found herself enveloped by a warm light. She let out a gasp as she recognized where she was. The palace? But how?

She began looking around until she recognized the sound of something. "Tia?" she got closer and indeed recognized the voice of her sister. "Tia. TIA!" she found her sister standing on the balcony, the moon high in the sky.

"If only I tried harder. Maybe you'd be here with me now." Celestia spoke to herself, peering up into the heavens.

"Tia," Luna called out to her, reaching to touch her sister only to go right through her. What was going on?

"I remember when mother first brought you home. You were the most adorable little foal. You were so energetic you almost always tipped over when you ran. I was so nervous that you wouldn't like me." A solemn laugh escaped the lips of the princess. "But when you immediately tittled over and hugged my leg all my fears subsided."

Luna now realized what was happening. This was a memory. When Nightmare Moon trapped Celestia and began draining her power, did that somehow connect them? Or did the bond they used to share with the Elements had something to do with it.

"Do you remember when you first tried to pronounce my name? The only eligible part was Tia." She was remembering happier times.

"I failed you Luna. As your big sister I was supposed to look after and protect you. I was so naïve back then. Remember when we were heralded as Princesses and our defeat over Discord, the love and admiration of so many ponies. Remember when we banished Sombra? Every time we accomplished something great I felt so proud that I began to lose sight of what gave me inspiration in the first place.

I remember that day I was first tasked to raise the Sun. I was so nervous, but then you came running up to me. I remember your words clearly. "Tia I hope to grow up to be like you some day." Her lips curved into a brief smile. "As long as you were there to support me I felt like I could do anything. I let my ego as the older and wiser sister get the best of me. I mistook your concerns and loneliness as mere overreactions. Because I failed to take your concerns seriously I may have lost you forever. " sorrow then etched onto the face of the Alicorn of the Sun. "I failed you baby sister." Tears began to flow from the Alicorn's eyes. "Not a night doesn't go by when I think of my failure and how much you must have been suffering. Only now when it is too late I wish to act like your big sister." Her words were now angry, but they were directed at herself. "Luna….sister…if I could have one more chance I'd do it all over again. I'd never abandon you. It isn't fair!" she suddenly wailed. "That you have to suffer for my failures." She whispered. "I know I don't have any right to ask you this, but can you ever find it in your heart to forgive me?"

"Sister…I'm the one who should apologize. I shouldn't have been so quick to throw away our bond. I…I won't let this thing win. I won't let it do what it pleases anymore." A new surge of power coursed through Princess Luna.


Nightmare Moon's wings spread and her hands and horn glowed. "This is the end of you mettlesome creature." The evil Alicorn bared its fangs as it pointed her horn at Naruto.

An explosion of dark, yet benevolent energy drew the attention of both combatants. They turned as Princess Luna underwent a transformation. Her light azure mane transformed into a brilliant Persian blue color. Her light phthalo coat was now a deep cerulean color and what was once a little girl now stood a goddess of a woman in blue shimmering gown painted with white sparks reminiscent of the sun.

"Nightmare Moon, Thee shall no longer do as thee please anymore. We will end of your tyranny and banish thee to the darkest depths of the Underworld."

"Luuuuuuuuuna." The creature wailed as it shot towards her, temporarily forgetting about Naruto. The dark woman soon found itself sent hurling back by the might of the Moon Princess. Luna landed next to Naruto who was in awe by the transformation.

"Brave warrior, we thank you. Let us kick this abhorrent abomination from my mind." Luna could feel herself once more taking control of her power. Control over her mind. After all one of her domains was that of the realm of dreams and now that she was now crippled by fear and despair Luna had the power to free Naruto from the current restrictions of the plain as well as rendering Nightmare Moon without a source of negative emotion to feed on.

Naruto found himself blanketing in an even bright gold aura. "It is about time the connection has been reestablished." A familiar voice spoke. "You somehow managed to find yourself in trouble in a world where peace is supposed to reign. You truly are a magnet for danger."


A grin formed on Naruto's face. 'We'll have to play catch-up later Kurama. We got one ugly parasitic monster ass to kick!" 'Naruto not only once more called upon his most familiar form he went a step further changing into something more befitting to his current form with resulted in him being blessed him with wings to fly and a horn to channel his power.

The two of them took to the sky with a mighty flap of their wings. Nightmare Moon let out a snarl but would not be deter by this new development. She took to the air after them, with the intent to destroy them once and for all.

EH Chapter 13! Showdown Part 2! In the Mind Battle

The battle against Nightmare Moon continues. Trapped within the mindscape Naruto encounters the true form of the host of the Nightmare. Princess Luna. Now with the battle taking place on two fronts the group does everything in their power to just survive. 

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Equestrian Heroes 11! The Showdown Part 1
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Naruto and Twilight continued their run down the dark hallways of the castle.  They pushed their way through large double doors into one of the castle’s many chambers when they encountered one of the last creatures Naruto expected to counter.
“Ashby.” He murmured as his face nearly went white from shock. To think the Nightmare’s power was even capable of Necromancy.   Standing between them and the other chamber the Satyr now covered in midnight black fur raised his hands which flickered with hellish flames which indicated he got a little upgrade as well.
“From no point further will you travel. Her majesty wants you dead and I shall oblige.”
The Satyr was nothing more than a mere undead servant.   “Twilight go.”  Naruto began to step forward as he prepared to challenge the creature one on one.
“I understand…”  Twilight




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SANM Part 3! Ch 13! Harmony Rises!Equestrian Heroes
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“I hope you’ll be ready to fight when the time comes.” Twilight found herself jarred out of her thoughts. The group was continuing their journey in the forest. “There’s no telling what waits for us at the end of this journey.”
Twilight couldn’t help but notice how virtually fearless the orange pony was. She couldn’t help but wonder if he was just naturally that brave or was just plain reckless. “Once we get the elements everything will work out.”
“And if we’re beaten to them?” Naruto countered her statement.
“We have to get the elements at all costs. We cannot afford to fail.”
Naruto couldn’t help but smile, this unicorn seemed to be mighty stubborn. “Just remember that no matter what happens we got your back. Just have fate in us. As long as we’re able to fight we won’t lose.”

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mdizzle999872 Featured By Owner 5 days ago  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks for the watch ( that was a lot of scrolling I just had to do)
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cmcwiki Featured By Owner Edited Aug 14, 2015
Dude I am loving equestrian heroes so far, *binge reading on my phone* I am up to chapter nine now. You write great plots, but one thing bothers me. I don't really like confronting people so I will let Fluttershy take care of it. Fluttershy?

:iconfluttershyplz: Mr. Kyuubi16 sir? You have a really nice story here. But there is a problem with it. Not that it takes away from the story i mean. Its just that there are times where homonyms are used or it seems that there are words missing in a thought. I think that a careful second perusing might make your story even better. Have a nice day!
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TheRealKyuubi16 Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2015
Yeah I'll try and fix it when I get the chance. 
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VoGoshinki Featured By Owner Aug 8, 2015
Have you seen the new dbz movie in theaters by any chance?
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TheRealKyuubi16 Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2015
Should have 2 chapters by tomorrow. Maybe 1. 
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VoGoshinki Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2015
Understood.
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TheRealKyuubi16 Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2015
No, too busy going to work. 
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tysm for faving Dipcifica vs Wendip (Gravity falls) by PrennCooder  i hope you enjoy my other arts too :D
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GiuseppeAzzarello Featured By Owner Jun 23, 2015
thanks for the fav :)
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Flamestrike365 Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2015
You still didn't put your Sailor Moon story in here!
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